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Reviews For: Jealousy

Angie
2008-01-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseReally well written, about a subject I think never occurs to most readers. But it's natural that there would be jealousy of Alec. I'm sure it happens IRL with jockeys. With a few changes, this story could work well as original fiction.
floppyearsthebunny
2007-11-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good. I like your stories, the one's where Pam lives and Alec races.
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