Hu? Is it completed yet?

OMG! this is the absolute cutest thing that i have ever read ! haha please update? hehehe

Great story

This is amazing! I lalalalove it! XD

Ok...I will admit I love the twists and turns in this story. The way the characters acted and all the troubles. But you totally dropped the uchiha brothers fight who won...and who of the two girls died?

Please don't kill Minato!

Jesus, Minato. Chill. Like you said before, Naruto's in a three year old body, but he has the mind of a fifteen year old, and you weren't exactly there to teach him not to swear. It's not his fault, and damnit isn't even that bad. Blondaime.

thanks:) - added to my C2.

I really don't like this story much! I don't know why I have it on alert..YOU give WAY too much power to that 'pink-haired abusive wh*re'..I mean, I'm so annoyed with her in these chapters..All she does is abuse Naruto and him just taking it and everyone else allowing it...It's so annoying and cliche! Urgh! Way did I put this ON alert, I wonder..Probably having Minato alive etc..That's the only logical reason but now..Urgh! It's going away.

Hola!

I came back to review again and of course I've finished reading this story!

Hmm, let me think ... This story was amazing! I found something to do to spend my free time by reading this story. I was really pleased.

And oh, hey ... if you rewrite this story, I hope you at least follow the storyline in the manga... In this story Kushina died and Minato did not know how it happened, but in the manga Minato knew exactly what happened that night and Kushina was Kyubi previous host.

But, you write this story in 2007 until 2008 anyway, it explains why and because it has been revealed now... How Kushina died and you know, everything so, I hope you make a better story.

Well, sorry for the long babbling, but this is not a critic or offended you, I just want to say it (write it).

Hm, the rewrite will not come out soon you say? Well, that's okay, I'll wait for it! _

(And sorry for my bad English, since it's not my mother language after all :p)

Hey, there...

I just fpund this story and began reading it and... this story is great!

And well, I read your author note planning to rewrite this story and I can't wait looking for it!

Also, let me finish reading this story first, bye-bye!

I like the idea of a rewrite, however, can you leave the original up? Also, an idea I had awhile back is: What if Kaikou and Madara were the same person? I think that would be a major plot twist (plus it's never been done before! XD).

I hate when authors do rewrite becuz 9/10 times the story is left abandoned anyways..There are ONLY 2 reasons for a rewrite of a AUTHORS story! The FIRST reason being the MOST common even-thou authors USE the EXCUSE of wanting to better the original storyline to fix this, add that etc..THE REASON for the rewrite is mostly due to the author having NO more ideas for the original story and CAN'T finish it, so, they, in-turn do a REWRITE to PROLONG the life of the story and LIE about it! Nine out of ten times both stories, the original and the rewrite are ALWAYS left half finished and abandoned and when authors do the EXCUSE of REWRITES, I KNOW then, that I should quit..It never leads anywhere good.

The second reason are those 1% that really DO want to better the story etc..I see so little of it..I've come across LESS then a handful that actually does manage to finish what they say..

What group are you? I'm judging that this story has been left abandoned for so long..I'm going to assume you're with the first...The reason why I even have this on ALERT is due to Minato being alive! We, the readers see plenty where the "MOTHERS" alive but not Minato..

Lastly, How often do you see authors finish stories where they say, they're doing re-writes..BE honest..I'm sure you've come across stories where authors CLAIMS this and that, but never does finish either..It's way I dread when authors CLAIM they'll do it better the next time but in reality; they have NOTHING LEFT except to improve on the chapters that are already there..That's not saying or doing much! It's the same with authors that adopt from other authors but ONLY adding scene or deleting scene from the already existing chapters but NEVER manage to go further then that of their own.. It's the same principal! I dislike both!

So, I vote 'NO'..But that's just me! I have doubts you'd be able to finish the new rewrite or even get it started without actually ADDING in a NEW CHAPTER! So, I'm giving up on this story eventhou I live Minato's character being alive.

BYE!

Well, I, for one, look forward to this rewrite you're talking about. I honestly wasn't too impressed with this version because of all the flaws you mentioned, but I can see that it clearly has a ton of potential to be very great.

So, if you rewrite it, you have at least one person who will definitely read it.

This. Is. The . BEST FRICKIN' THING I HAVE EVR READ ( fan fiction wise ) You have the same jacked up sense of humor i do!