Sorry, but that was really hard to read.
Use quotation marks please.

lmao can't wait till this is updated i lvoed it.

This chapter is a pleasure, and a interesting chapter. Have a gratifying day tomorrow. Keep smiling and be rejoiceful. :-)

It is just a fine, and cool chapter. Keep smiling. :-)

interesting... hey, were you trying to alternate underlined characters in your name, becase if you were, you missed the C. aerae is what your letters read. any way, till next time
~Kaly

Nice story. Do you still need a beta?

so so...
though it would have been better if there was a real conversation going on...hehehe..

Very good chapter today. I have enjoyed it. :-)
May we have more please.

:O I like your style of writing. I read every lines, even if I usually skip details. While you don't use quotes, the dialogue is still easy to read. Red haired Hermione, hmm interesting. A blond Snape? Is it dirty blonde, or like, Malfoy blonde? Anyway, I am half hoping that they will bump into the actors who play them in the movie and become very shocked about that, lol. Anyway, can't wait for the next update =)

A simply wonderful chapter you have written. Because of this can we have more please. Only if there is more to come. If not good story. :-)
Have a good day tomorrow, and keep on smiling all the day through.

Thanks for clearing that up =) I'll patiently wait for your next update!

Okay this chapter was very good. Is there any more chapters coming our way. Oh by the way have a good weekend. :-)

Likes the story. more please =) Just wondering one thing, why oh why Severus calls Hermione mudblood o_o He never says those word again after his worst memory but oh well, looking forward for next chapters!

oh good chapter! i like Sev's little reaction there. update soon!

lol. very funny. although i dont really remember that part in the story. then again i did read it only in about 7 hours so maybe i missed a part. huh. or did you just make that part up. ...