This was amazing!

I actually like malfoy now

kinda xD

brilliant! love the rain part.

An interesting picture of Draco...I like your idea that his childhood wasn't awful...he had to become that cocky somehow, and unstinted praise would do that to a kid...

I like how you left who Draco's wife was open to interpretation.

I was confused, though, as to how this relationship turned up, and how in the world they managed to survive with their respective prejudices (don't tell me Gryffindors aren't prejudiced against Slytherins, because they ARE!), and I would have liked slightly more detail there.

Other than that...great job.

wow, that was a Malfoy story through and through. How could Lucius act like that? Why did he tell Draco all those things. Good ending.

excellent. compelling to the every last word. a marvelous creation. ( not sucking up) ( being deadly serious) very interesting piont of veiw. didn't think anyone would have dared to pull this of in that way.

This is very well written story, but it's kind of boring and it's a REALLY old theme. Creativity, people! Think up your own themes!

It's so sad! I love the insinuation of the boundless love he feels for his wife and son.

I love it. Wow.

I THINK ITS A GREAT FANFICTION , YOU SHOULD REALLY HARRY UP AND WRITE MORE ITS GREAT HOPE TO READ MORE.

Great story, I loved it! It has a harmony in it, almost like a poem.

Pure brilliance. I lurve it. I like that you switched points of view, that Draco had everything that he wanted as a child, but slowly realized the facade behind it all. Writing style was great. Bravo!

That was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

Nice, very nice!

hey i love ur story this is by far the best. i have put you on my favourites list. Keep on writing great stories!

The cooliest story, is good. You should do more like that.

Luv,

Draco's Girl

YOU CALL THIS SHORT!