Oh, wow...

I really liked it! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

BTW About your boy troubles, I laughed so hard when I read it because I'm having a similar problem with the guy I like who's a junior and I'm a freshman too.

Try being friends with him and see how it goes from there. But don't fall too fast because then if something happens, you might get hurt. Go slowly.

Anyways, good story and I'm looking frward to reading your other stories.

This was sweet. The ending was sad. Probably didn't help that I read this right after one of those tear-jerker movies too.

That was so sad and beautiful...I am crying right now!

~XxNFxX

that was really good..about your boy trouble just try to start a friendship with him and if he ever becomes single, your friendship will put you on the right foot to becoming a girlfriend
hope i helped! just message me if you need any more help, i'd be happy to help!