I love this story. Its very well written and I wanted to know theres gonna be a sequel? I'd love one. Thank you.

There's definitely a story here. You've obviously done your research, stuck with the facts and seamlessly integrated the different fandoms into the story so they all match up. Great job, well done, and glad to see that the special ops community is as small as I keep thinking it is. I heard this quote once, "There;s a lot of Air Force Generals, but still, we all seem to know one another through some classified op or another"

Cheers

max

I'm a little confused. Since Melissa only knows about what happened to her father through telephatic dreams how could she have proof that Colonel Sheppart killed her father? Also, why doesn't she tell anyone that her father is still alive? I don't think that any release of classified information can be considered treason although that can be excused since it might be different in the Stargate verse.

god DAMN that was good.

This is on par with the Stargate Horizon series.

nice fic.

Not bad at all. I think we did a great job here, Red Leader. If you ever want to work together again, let me know.

Great part!

fun chapter

SWEET! Now that's a team.

good chapter.

its a good chapter.

Great beginning! I like it very much. Never did watch JAG when it ran the first time, but catch once in awhile in syndication. I like it very much! Keep it going !

So very well done!

So very well done!

its a nice chapter.