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| Jan Lee 2008-09-05 ch 1,  | abuseYou had me...ambiguous and still entertaining and eyebrow raising. She and Ino...*really?* Hahaha...nicely played, nicely played. Otherwise, well-written with no grammatical or punctuation errors that I noticed (of course I was rushing to get to the end, shame on me) and your imagery and dialogue flowed very nicely. Kiba and Sakura seemed like them, no complaints about characterization from me. Thanks for sharing! ~JLM |
| TigeressGV 2008-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh you are so BAD! ...In that I-Love-It-But-That-Was-Just-Wrong!way. You got me so good, I had to read it twice. I have been enjoying your stories most of the night and am starting to get addicted to the Inuzakas. I started with Saving Grace. That story made me question my own sanity...several times. Very well written. The way you write is something I have rarely come across since I started reading Naruto fandom. You can have me smacking my own head, feeling Sakura's confusion and pain in one paragraph. Then in the next, I'm laughing my panties off as Tsume goes bounding through the battlefield with dogs at her heels and NOTHING on but a wicked smile. Thank you very much for taking the time and effort to write and post it so people like myself can enjoy it. |
| HannahsaurusRexLovesKiba 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abusepahahahahhahahahahhaha i loved it my favorite part was "Unhand that!" hahahahaha and yes, Unless you're ninjas like Kiba and Sakura. Then you can do whatever you want. lmao i loved it. |
| Sakuraangel1327 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abusehaha, loved it. dont get the catorgory though. may wanna re think it. or was that a joke as well? |
| xinrina 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuselol I hekka thought they were going to have sex lol. Anyway great job. Xxinn :)>:. |
| shallowheart321 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseo..m..g! i cant believe u did that! lol |
| Porkchop's Little Ditty 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseDripping with innuendo, this piece had my mind wandering into the gutter. Much so, that I had to read this out loud to my husband; who also thought the outcome was going to be Kiba giving some oral sex to Sakura. Sexy and clever- two great attributes you have brought about in your KibaSaku stories... which is what has drawn me into the pairing to begin with. |
| franchu7 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseYou tricked me! I thought about something else *smile*!! It was very good!like it a lot. |
| bliiss14 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseyour mean >.< hahahaa:P loved it |
| celinae 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseXDXDXD Evil! XD Teasing us like that! Manipulating.. me into thinking that... XD; ^^ Cute, though dangerously misleading! :P |
| EfrainMan 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseLOL for implied wrongness XD Loved it! |
| L my secret lover 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abusei rely LOVED THIS its a good story |