OMGsh LIEK A STARLANCER FANFIC UR GANGSTA!1!

You konw, this is pretty good work. Well thought-out and definitely a possibility given the world of Freelancer. You need to continue this.

Great chapter!

I personally am a Starlancer fan..Haven't tried Freelancer..

But leastways.

The Coalition VS the Alliance always has been a favorite. Being a new style "Communism VS free world" type thing.

I REALLY like the fact that you are in the Starlancer universe. Not many Starlancer fic's out there!

The chapter is good. I like how they are at the "last stand" type of area. And the part about the "Unnamed pilot"... That part cracked me up.

Woot. Back in the Freelancer fiction game, are you? :)

Lol... the unnamed pilot. 300 kills in 12 months ;-)

I remember the days of playing this game... never did beat the final mission on 'hard'.