hi! i have been reading since yesterday but i haven't been able to get very far. don't get me wrong, i LOVE it so far, but it's just so long! lol it might take me a few more days to read it, but when i finish, i will definitely review again!

OH HOLY CRAP...Wow. Amamzing talent. I think I know who has her, but I'm not quite sure where she is or how she got there. I'll, unfourtuately have to wait till tommorrow to read the next chapter. Gotta get some sleep before work tommorrow.

Untill the next chapter...

Sparkling Dolphin

Wow. Getting some E/Oness in that chapter. :D LOL

God I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Sparkling Dolphin

OMG! Fantastic chapter. God, it's been almost a year since I've had internet and this story was one of the things I missed the most. I'm so glad I'm back and able to read it.

Ok. First of all, was Olivia sold on the black market or something? And have the dectectives found the right lead yet?

Second, What is the perp doing to Olivia besides hitting her? if anything?

Last, How does the air where Olivia is keep changing from hot to cold?

Can't wait till the next chapter...
Sparkling Dolphin

hey, love it!, you obviously know the show very well because the chemistry you created is amazing. keep writing, i'll be comming back to read more!.

Wow..that was awesome. You kno I can see this as being the first SVU TV movie or something like that...it would be neat to see how what you have written would play out on the big screen.

I kinda expected the engagement and Elliot returning home. It may not have been the ending that everyone was hoping for..but it was reality and that's good enough for me. I cannot wait for you to post new stories or carry on with in progress stories. You are a very talented individual and continue to do what you love...write.

Sorry bout Ike...we didn't get a chance to formally meet him down her in Mississippi...but when you described those winds..sounded like Katrina. I live in the Jackson metro area but we still felt Katrina that far. I'm glad you're ok and that it wasn't worse.

I look forward to more of your work and have enjoyed reading Flight. Until next time... :)

First off please forgive me for takin so long to review...life has been hectic...so they gav u the runaround before graduation too huh? glad its over and congrats again!!

This chapter got off to a bit of a slow start..my fav part was when Olivia finally got to meet Morse..that was so excellent writing there chica!! The whole exchange.. i was like wow. Hm Dickie being a lil pimp huh? Thats cute. I wonder how this guy keeps gettin in da apt cuz Elliot had such a hard time gettin in the first time and he's a cop.

Just wanted you to kno I haven't forgotten bout ya and i'm about to start on the last chapter...wow..already? Well..nice work again and congrats...btw, what are your plans now that you're finished with school?

Really? No E/o? after all that time i invested in this story? really?

First of all CONGRATULATIONS on an amazing story, it was thrilling all the way to the end(just the way a great story should be) and I enjoy it thorughly. Now on to the big stuff;
1) it wasn't to far fetched and it wasn't to unrealistic (i think you had the two balanced perfectly throughout the story)

2)In reguards to "him" I think that had you given "him" a name it would have taken away a lot of the mystery surrounding the character and that would have made his role in the grand sceme of the things seem much bigger than what it was (Liv's abuser and captor: and while that might seem like a big role to others, to me the important stuff was about how this affected liv and the people who surround her, Henry included).

3) In reguards to the whole E/O or lack there of thing: I am a huge E/O fan and ordinarially a story like this one would leave me frustrated( i mean why hint a something that's not gonna happen), but I love what you did with their relationship in this story. I like that while there were small glances at what could have been, you didn't overwhelm us readers with the back and forth (do i or don't i, will they or won't they type stuff). In the what was important was their parntership and the relationships they had with their spouses. My favorite part of the story was the moment where as they clasped hands their rings touched and both drove away with the thought of it must be fate.

Anyways these are a few of my thoughts on your story and I do hope they were helpful. Please keep up the good work and i cna't wait to see what you come up with next.

~Books

First, do not apologize for anything. You've had more than your share of problems, and I'm glad you got through the bad weather.

Second, I'm very pleased with how the story ended. Olivia and Elliot find a way to put any romantic feelings between them to rest. Then, Kathy and Elliot reconciled in a manner consistant with their situation and moved on with their lives.

Also, it is appropriate for Jonathan to speak to Kathy as they are both in similar relationship situations.

Futhermore, you capture the Elliot/Olivia banter well during the park scene.

Next, Maya, as the best friend, is the appropriate "first person" to reveal her engagement to.

Additionally, it is refreshing to see Cragen's superior eat crow-with Olivia and Cragen present.

Finally, a realistic back-to-work scene: desk duty for the convealescing officers with a dose of Munch-initiated banter.

Keep up the good work with whatever you write in the future.

Wow it's finished!
I'll miss it. A lot. That was the longest story I've ever read... there were times where I was like 'hey, where is it going after all?', sometimes I've had to read back two chapters just to catch up with it, but I'll tell you, that was a hell of a story and I loved every damn angsty word of it. I also liked the way things turned out. EO-ish as it was, I think the non-EO ending was perfect, you managed to bring closure to them both without destroying everyone around.
So, that's it. I'm not sure if I could express myself, in the end I just wanted to tell you that it was a great story, congratulations!

I don't quite know what to say without sounding horribly, hopelessly cliche. I really loved this story -- not because it make me happy or because it made me laugh but because it was so real. When I first started reading it on , I really wasn't sure about it but I kept getting sucked in. I was really happy when I found it on here so that I could review without having to make a new account. But anyway, whenever I checked back or got an email alert that a new chapter was up, I couldn't wait to read it. It gave me something to look forward to after some very long days.

Thank you! for not putting Olivia and Elliot together. And that's coming from someone who loves E/O. Toward the beginning, I really wanted it to turn out with them together, but it's much better to not go that way. After so many chapters of realness, that ending would have just been so predictable and, well, not real. I loved how you ended it, with everyone happy, but not so much that it was cliche.

Sometimes I thought that the chapters were too long (just for time purposes), but in retrospect the length made the story better. You gave your readers time to get sucked into this world without too many breaks, which could have potentially ruined it.

Anyway, this is a very long review, but it was a wonderful story and so it deserves such. Thank you so much for putting this out there! I'll be looking forward to your next masterpiece!

-Becca

I loved it! The story was great. I'm not a big EO person, though I don't mind it, so I spent the whole story worrying that you were going to end up forcing them together and leaving Kathy and Jonathan in the dust. But you did it perfectly. They are closer than most marriage, and have feelings for each other, just not feelings in that way. The ending was perfect in my opinion. I loved the story!

Wonderful, suspenseful, edge of our seat story. I've been there from the beginning and would get excited when I saw an update.

Totally with you on the hurricane winds. For the winds to be like that and no rain...crazy. And schools are still closed (probably for the rest of the week).

Can't wait for your next story!

Congratulations on this epic achievement. A lot, a lot of work!

I've enjoyed the story.

I enjoyed the procedural details of the early chapters most. You lost me with the soapy OCs and story lines - personally, I could live without them but I understand they give a depth to the characters we really care for. Don't get me wrong -you did a good job with them - they were well drawn - it's just I just could care less about them.

The lengthy time scale? Well ...realistic I guess. Olivia's trauma seemed never ending and the recovery with its various setbacks went on...and on! But hey! Nobody could get over what you did to her quickly right.

Your villains were amongst the best elements in the story - all unbelievably creepy. I admire that you held back from naming Olivia's captor. Good decision!

I was never convinced by Olivia's sympathy towards Morse - To have somebody watching you intimately for so long would be so psychologically damaging I cannot believe she could bear to be near him. Even though his actions helped to find her.

I'm glad it wasn't traditional E/O. Never liked Jonathan but he was well drawn and it fits that Olivia would be with him.

So, congratulations again in overcoming all your difficulites with this story. A huge job well done!