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| XxTypoMasterxX 2008-08-04 ch 5,  | abuseaw tht was cute! |
| mandapandabug 2008-07-23 ch 5, | abuseyou were a bit rushed weren't you? well, good enough! Jou and Kaiba get it on. well, you know what i mean. i liked that Tristan was the one who got them together. that was a good twist. so... i don't know what else to say... my reviews normally consist of ideas for future chapters, but this is the end, so... until the next story! review you later^_^ |
| melodyz07 2008-07-21 ch 5, | abuseThat was so cute ^^ Loved it ! |
| powerfulcheese 2008-07-21 ch 5, | abuseI loved JOey's confession, very smart use of pronouns. Yay for you! Another awesome chapter. I can't wait for the next thing you post, keep up the great writign! |
| Rascal609 2008-07-20 ch 5, | abuseHI Satoshi! ITS Yuri from school :} (did i ever tell you my japanese nickname?! IDK awell, if you dont remember me /cry/ lol) But yeah GREAT STORY thats the only Yugio fan fici will ever read (just cause u wrote it and i was boredededed) :} Nice story great plot im blushing from reading it lol cause it sounds SOO Awkward lol Rascal |
| BandGeeK24 2008-07-20 ch 5, | abuseoh my godd! i LOVED that! that was the most adorable fic i've read in a long time!! great job! |
| Kukki Boo 2008-07-20 ch 5, | abuseWow, it's over. Cute! Especially Tristan ^^ Have fun on your vacation! |
| ONIX-21 2008-07-20 ch 5, | abuseaw that was another sweet chapter!! and a nice sweet ending to it !! :D love it great work |
| melodyz07 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuseThis story is very interesting. Please update! By the way, who is Alexa? she is an OC character? |
| mandapandabug 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuseman Kaiba is such an emo bastard! i don't mean to be rude, but, really, he needs to be a little more open. Joey isn't even that bad. he asked Kaiba when he started to care, and due to the way he was behaving, it makes even more sense as to why joey would think Kaiba doesn't like him! look at that! Kaiba's being all pissy and mean to Joey, you know? like really. ok well i like that this was updated! review you later^_^ |
| powerfulcheese 2008-07-08 ch 4, | abuseyour ending is fine, it makes me want to read more. please update soon, i'm really enjoying this story :D |
| Kukki Boo 2008-07-08 ch 4, | abuseKaiba blushed! Scared! TT Yeah, sorry... anyway... Don't worry, I don't hate you ^^ We are getting somewhere with this! Whoo! -claps- |
| animehpgurl 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abusegood fic! |
| mandapandabug 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abusewell i would be happy if you just updated this within a reasonable time. and if you want another story i have some ideas. i love fics that have someone coming after Jou, like a suitor and Kaiba is all jealous and tries to sneekily get Jou to love him instead... or something. well. if you write something like that i may forgive you for the long wait. ok. review you later^_^ |
| powerfulcheese 2008-07-07 ch 3, | abuseYAY! An update ^_^ please update soon, this is great! |