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| morbidlySWEET 2008-07-22 ch 14,  | abuseso depressing. but i love it. update soon |
| lamcsi 2008-07-08 ch 14, | abuseSo sad, but a truly great story. I'm hoping there are happier times ahead in Sara and Grissom's future. Looking forward to what is going to happen next. |
| Vega Dreamer 2008-07-07 ch 14, | abuseHm... Interesting. Grissom needing to change all of his surroundings. Is he trying to focus his attentions on something he can actually control? I really like this, I'm glad you decided to continue with the story. I'm intrigued by the story and I can't wait to see exactly where you go with it. =) ~Vega Dreamer |
| cabooklover21 2008-07-04 ch 12, | abuseJust wanted to drop you a note and let you know I'm still here, waiting for the next update. This is still such a great story and even though it isn't finished yet, I find myself rereading it. Definitely a favorite. :) |
| Amanda Ruth 2008-06-27 ch 14, | abuseStarting off, I'm just going to point out the only typo I saw in this chapter: Grissom let go looked away “Let’s go home.” Besides that, another wonderful chapter. I was so excited that you posted again, but I had no time to read until now. I hope you have more luck with your muse, seeing how long it took to update for you. Stupid muses. Mine is being a bit bratty as well. Here's to overcoming writer's block and pinning down our muses, eh? Amanda Ruth ^_^ |
| smacky30 2008-06-22 ch 14, | abuseEverytime I think I've figured this out - I haven't. I think you are using the house to represent Grissom changing things for Sara. I just really feel sorry for them both and want to slap them silly. :D Still - you've drawn me in and I want to see the outcome. |
| lnl4ever 2008-06-21 ch 14, | abuseas much as i love this story and your writing, i really wish that the story would progress some more. less of the rebuilding of the house and more of the rebuilding relationship of sara and grissom. |
| Sarafly 2008-06-19 ch 14, | abuseThe story is si beautiful,I Love it. Grissom is adorable in his own dark way. Please, don't keep us waiting. |
| jules03 2008-06-18 ch 14, | abuseYay! Another chapter! Grissom is going to be broke by the time this story/renovation of his home/life is done! Yay for new chapters! |
| RubixCSIpuzzle 2008-06-18 ch 14, | abusehey i'm glad you posted a new chapter, it was really good by the way! well done. I can't wait for the next one. |
| ProWriter11 2008-06-18 ch 14, | abuseI just discovered this story. It's really quite remarkable. I hope you add chapters often. |
| Munebunny 2008-06-18 ch 14, | abuseGee, Griss is a little obscessed isn't he? And poor Sara thinks he doesn't care about her. I bet it'll be interesting when he finally comes to his senses. ^_^ |
| ckofshadows 2008-06-18 ch 14, | abuseOoh, I'd forgotten about this story... great update! |
| nick55 2008-06-18 ch 14, | abuseI was so happy to see this was updated. Yes, I'm reading it again. Like I said before it was never your writing it is a damn good story but the angst level got a little much for a while, yes I'm a wimp. But I've sucked it up and plowing ahead because I know this will continue to wow me. I love the subtle way Grissom is letting her lead the way. I wish she would see this. McK |
| lovalley 2008-06-18 ch 14, | abuseAw, he's building a home for her! I think! I never know, you keep me on the edge of my seat! Thanks! |