 pwnedBYmomo 2009-10-05 . chapter 7I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. |
 Kirida 2009-08-27 . chapter 7LOVE IT! I am really loving this story. Excellently written, you got me hooked from the first chapter...and groaning with disappointment when I came to last uploaded chapter. Please hurry, I cannot wait to find out what happens next. |
 LadyLady1994 2009-08-22 . chapter 7I loved this! Update as soon as possible! |
 AvocadoLove 2009-08-17 . chapter 7I am so serious when I say that this fan fiction is every inch as good as books I have read. I mean, WOW. Author, you are really good. What can I say? The characterization is spot on. The dialoge... it's just like the actual characters are talking. *peers at you* You're not an Ava-writer in disguise, right?
It is so strange -- I was just talking with a friend and saying I really wanted to read something where Aang finds more airbenders, and then I stumble across this! Crazy!
Anyway, the romance is coming along nicely. I laughed out loud so many times (OMG, I cannot believe you got the kids stoned with the nomads. This is glorious.)
Please, please, please update soon. Geez, this fic is a treasure. It really is. |
 Kesshichan 2009-08-10 . chapter 7Great chapter, I really enjoyed it! I got a kick out of Katara thinking she was kissing Zuko and it turned out to be Haru. Very nice. |
 ugeisha 2009-08-07 . chapter 7I really like where this story is going and I can't wait for you to continue it! |
 Mary Sue's Ugly BFF 2009-08-01 . chapter 7Oh. My. God.
This is such a great story, a wonderful take on what could have happened, and I honestly was loving it. The characterization was superb, humor spot on and... well, Zuko and Katara's budding attraction palpable.
And then, you have the gang get high. And I laughed my ass off. It was so perfect and believable. My heart practically stopped when Haru kissed Katara, because like her, I honestly thought that Zuko had actually done it, and I was a little disconcerted. After all, he's a real gentleman, and I didn't think he'd ever take advantage of a girl, especially Katara.
I can't wait til the next chapter. |
 plainmisundrstood 2009-07-28 . chapter 7SO GOD! and SO FUNNYY!
i'm falling in love with this story more and more. it's great to see you haven't abandoned it. looking forward to more chapters in the future.
hahaha, and that scene with katara and hiro is done so well. i love how you think things through in your storytelling instead of taking the easy way out. and i love how the characters stay so true to themselves, and how you manage to capture the quirks of each individual character.
again...so good... |
 black-n-white-stockings 2009-07-25 . chapter 7<3 <3 <3 <3 Just found this and really starting to love it! Please update soon! |
 3WoRdS8LeTTeRs.xoxo. 2009-07-24 . chapter 7haha I really thought it was Zuko kissing Katara and I was like WTF is wrong with him? lol But it was Haru...who is acting like a total creeper. And Katara frantically saving Zuko was great! Im actually relieved that is wasnt Zuko that kissed Katara because its too soon for that. Cant wait for the next chapter! |
 explodeychik 2009-07-24 . chapter 7I love your ability to keep the story whole, and not just focus on Zuko and Katara, but the entire group, and this is what makes it all the more believable and enjoyable.
Great chapter, look forward to more, even if it takes another year! ^_^ |
 Spoonz_10 2009-07-23 . chapter 7 well way to go! you kept me up till five in the morning reading this!
Be proud. The most I usually stay up is two. ;)
I like your interesting take on everything after the DOBS, (and to be completely honest...I must say I'm enjoying your version over the real one...>_>)
keep up the good work dearie. ^_^ |
 chewyish 2009-07-21 . chapter 7YAY! i am kindof extremely happy about this update (:
"you're a good cook."
oh zuko, you dork. 8D update soon! |
 Miss Katara x 2009-07-21 . chapter 7...
I have no idea what to say, this fanfiction is just the most amazing and outstandingly brilliant fanfic ever!
You managed to keep all the characeter's personalities and still manage you're own plot! It was so well constructed with so much humour and incredible use of vocabulary. The circus bit was my favourite, I even cringed for Katara when she couldn't do the acrobatics and was astounded at what Zuko could perform at the show.
The cave of two lovers was great too, Haru is slightly creepy, I must admit.
Everything fitted together so well I just can't believe you managed to create something so brilliant! I'm going to recommend this to all of my Avatar loving friends!
I also like the way you managed to keep Aang in perfect character, normally in Zutara they edit Aang's character a bit which lets the story down, but you managed to keep Aangs feelings and views, which is really sweet as he loves Katara so much.
I really hope that someday I will be able to write as incredible as you can.
Miss Katara x |
 Harlequin Jade 2009-07-20 . chapter 7Team Avatar got stoned...Lol! Looking forward to reading more. |