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| 00asianwriter00 2008-07-03 ch 6,  | abuseIt's a good thing that we read your A/n, since most reviewers don't do that. I hope that the war in Iraq ends soon, since we've been spending billions of money on it. -.-'" The chapter was kind of boring, it didn't have that much spark to catch my attention. |
| BeLuke 2008-07-01 ch 6, | abuseReally good characters, so in depth and alive, Diedara hates Itachi? Gaara is better than in Shippuden? I can't wait for the update! BeLuke |
| Jackson Michael 2008-06-29 ch 6, anon. | abuseRumour has it that the guy in Clash in the Land of Snow: Legacy Version will be making Naruto learn all of those Hyoton Jutsu's, they would be great for fighting Akatsuki Members like Kisame. |
| XFS 2008-06-29 ch 6, anon. | abuseThat cool writer who is making the Clash in the Land of Snow: Legacy Version is making a scene: when they are filming, Sakura uses an Earth based explosvie type Jutsu, more powerful then Deidara's Exploding Clay, when Naruto sees it he saids "Well let's all face it, Art is a Blast/Bang". That way when Deidara sees it (can all of the Akatsuki hate Naruto for all the bad things he said about there Organization, exerpt for Tobi who will caim to be a big fan) gets angrey at Naruto for stealing his line and Sakura for her Jutsu (also the fact that his new partner is a fan of the movie makes him more frusterated). |
| Kevin 2008-06-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseGreat story. I look forward to the battle, but this 2 on 2 doesn't bode well for the Suna brothers. I really hope that you don't lose your motivation and just leave this story unfinished or continue it and it be lackluster. I read your last work, part 2, and it was quite evident that your heart wasn't in that. |
| Epiphany's Apocalypse 2008-06-25 ch 6, | abusean excellent chapter, I always thought that Gaara was too bad-** to be capured so easily. I eagerly await your next update! |
| Dare9179 2008-06-16 ch 6, | abuseThis story is good keep it up. And your going a good pace. Keep writing more chapters. |
| ??? 2008-06-10 ch 6, anon. | abuseHi, can Mizu, Iwa and Kumo start searching for Naruto too: Iwa, because of his father, Kumo, because of his knolowedge of Juken and those Jutsu's, and Mizu, they hate all bloodline traits. |
| Beau13 2008-05-31 ch 6, | abuseVery good keep up the good work and please put the next chapter up soon |
| Marrissa 2008-05-30 ch 6, anon. | abuseYour story thus far is very good. It is moving a bit slow, and the chapters are much shorter than I would like, but it is an awesome read! |
| movintarget 2008-05-26 ch 6, | abusebeen reading your story for a very long time, don't know if I've reviewed enough to be remebered. so heres my two cents on the current chapter. I'd say the bushin thing will require more explanation before I decide on it's plausibility or not. The cannon fight with of Zabuza and the team 7 group would be the argument there but trying to discover the limit of a bushin would be difficult as i do not have the manga memorized or in aany format convienenbt for speed reading. so I say it works just dont do the same thing again, If jiryia pulls the same trick later in the story to escape his beating I will be annoyed and slightly happy at the same time as the collosal perv need to be in the story to make it fun. the fact that garra is still in the fight means that the fight against the akatsuki will be quite lop-sided if the same group are there as normal. If another pair were to show up then it would be interesting to see if not it will just be a face stomping fest while garra holds everyone down. |
| Kagaku 2008-05-25 ch 6, | abuseI just read all of your stories on a reccomendation from another author and I am very impressed. The original plotline was flawless and I loved the Naruto you portrayed. However, you are slowly slipping back into the cannon and that really takes away from the greatness of the story. Keep with the smart and secretive Naruto that is always two steps ahead of everyone else. Also spend more time on how Naruto accquired feelings for Hinata, and his grudge against Kakashi. Keep up the good work! |
| pwykersotz 2008-05-21 ch 6, | abuseArgh! You started another one, but even after your warnings I missed this until now! I actually found it through another author who's doing the Snow Princess movie fic with your characters. I eagerly await what comes next. |
| EmoNeenja3 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abuseDespite what you say, I think your story is pretty awesome! And how you say you are getting to far off from the actual manga, you dont want it to go exactly like that do you?? Keep your ideas and story original, so you do not lose the interest of your fans. And I like how a lot of the story is your own yet still somewhat keeps its actual truth. Just try not to follow the manga too much... |
| DonutBeagle 2008-05-09 ch 6, | abuseNicely done chapter, so how differently shall things play out? |