Once again you've managed to lure me into another of your stories, and I loved it. That was... great!

This was great, you handle drama well. :)

ok I'm sorry to say this I'm not to be mean but serously your gramer sucks and the story was kind of dull. I think my cat could wridt better stories.

'"Good evening, detective!" One of the two men standing in his living room greeted him.'

For some reason, I can only hear this in my head with a really stuffy British accent. XD

OH...Scary! Sequal!

LOVED IT! GREAT JOB!

WOOHOO!

What a great ending for a great story! I absolutely love it, you write drama so wonderful!

-“Danny…” She started, throwing a short glance at him to see if he was listening. When he looked at her, she continued, “I…I just wanted to say thank you for everything you have done for me. You could have been free, but no, you offered yourself as a hostage, to protect me. You risked your life for me, more than once. I…I’m so glad that you were there, I don’t want to think about what could have happened when you haven’t been there. Maybe then Damon hadn’t only kissed me, maybe he had done more and maybe I also wouldn’t be alive now. You…you showed me how important I am for you, and that I can always be sure that you are there. I love you, Danny, I love you so much. And…and I’m so sorry that you got hurt so much.” After she had ended, Lindsay sighed again, throwing another look at Danny, noticing a warm smile on his lips.-

I love Lindsay's speech :D The ending at Danny's apartment was very realistic, nobody would want to live there after what happened. Congrats for finishing your first drama fic! *applauds and throws M&M's*

You did a fantastic job, and I'm really looking forward to reading more of you!

EEP!

That sound right there? That was me, fainting and falling. You are very evil to leave us hanging like that! Danny, be alright! You better update fast...

VERY good chapter! I love how Ben is hesitating, I understand him, he wants to help DL but he also wants to help his brother... Ben, choose the good side! Or else.

I look forward to more.

LOVED THE CHAP U HAD ME SCARED FOR A SECOND THERE THOUGH!

WOW!

That was... incredibly amazing. What an amazing chapter! I love it! I loved how Danny 'safed' Lindsay by talking to Ben! Wow, I really don't know how to say how much I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter!

And I'm really glad we found out the reason they are held hostage!

WO! So sweet! and at the same time very amusing...Update soon"

HUGS!

Yes, I actually am aware that I shouldn't squee over this chapter... but I'm going to, prepare... *SQUEE*

Loved it! The beginning and the end were so cute, and everything in between was great. I love how you're writing this story! And I'm so glad Danny's with Lindsay :)

Wow! This is deep stuff! I love it! Just one request though. Please don't just kill them off at the end. I don't like stories where you get strung along, just to find that they get killed off in the end anyway! X

love the story ! i hope lindsey doesnt get raped especially with danny there-cant wait to see what happens