That was a tad bit sad.

This was really good but a bit difficult to follow at times. I suggest you just smooth your transitions a bit, it seemed to jump around. Unless that was the intention. Still, really good.

This is another excellent fanfic that reads like a lost scene from the show. You really write Jason and Tim well without it getting slashy. They are obviously close, but more like brothers than anything else.

I was really thrilled to see that you have a new story posted up and you didn't dissappoint! I really like the dynamic you have going between Jason and Tim...you truly have those two characters down well...it as as if I was watching it on my TV. Keep up the excellent in character writing. :-)