Well yeah the pairs aren't the best but the story is pretty good so please continue on...

Kawaii

I wish you'd write more. x3 This is already a good story. I'd never noticed a WakaxKai pairing before and now I like it. xD

Um...just make the chapters a bit longer. if you're typing on microsoft word, the font size should be 22 and write about eight-eleven pages.
other than that, you're great. (maybe a little work on the grammar, though.)

Yay i love OkiXOkami

I'm not a big fan of this pairing but i like this story so far