 Jenni-Marie-HP 11/19/11 . chapter 8LOVE this story absolutely love it, and the other two, they were amazing ,.., |
 Jessie13 12/19/04 . chapter 8Great story. Keep up the good work. |
 Ghostwriter 6/11/04 . chapter 8 Awesome! Just two things 1: I can't find your story "David's Revenge". 2: Shame on you for killing, Michael, Star, and Sam. You should've made them Pack. |
 Heir of Saturn 7/26/02 . chapter 8That was great ! I love your Lost Boys stories! :) I stayed up 'til about 3 AM wondering what would happen at the end of this one. You're an excellent writer ! _
TBH (unincorporated) |
 Saiyan Jalapeno 3/24/02 . chapter 8 awww..that was a perfect ending! Brilliant! |
 Smenzer 3/20/02 . chapter 1 Another great Lost Boys fic. How you described Laddie's confusion and feelings of betrayal/abandonment was perfect! I can understand how hard it was for him. You are a VERY talented author: dont stop writing! And I like how you showed the vampires care for each other, they are not just mindless killing creatures that some movies show. A great story! |
 MicahsCornChickLP 1/18/02 . chapter 8Yay! :::Claps::: you finished it! It's good... i'm glad you dragged it out like that, it made the ending more worthwhile Bravo! |
 Fransesca 1/4/02 . chapter 5Wha... you can't end it there! PLEASE WRITE MORE! :( I need my vampiric urges satisfied :S lol. Please don't stop there... write more? Please? I would ever so greatful... I will be in debt to you for ever! Huh? Is that not enough to make you finish :( I wanna see what Laddie decides! (If I were him the first second I saw The Pack I would jump on David and tell him to vamp me. Of course that's just me though _) Anyways... please for the love of David finish! Pwease? |
 doesn't live here anymore 11/19/01 . chapter 4This was just getting good...more please! |
 Rachael 10/2/01 . chapter 3 good! i like i like! |
 Angel 9/23/01 . chapter 2 I love this story. Please continue it and I really hope Laddie goes back to the Pack.
Peace out
Angel _ |
 doesn't live here anymore 9/9/01 . chapter 2Yeh, a sequel! Definately not how I pictured how Laddie would turn out, but with Lucy as a mom, you knew know! |
 MicahsCornChickLP 9/1/01 . chapter 1You had to onclude CotC didn't you? Keep it up! |