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| curbsidelover23 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abusewow, that was a beautiful story. i was confused on some parts but still, probably one of this best sylar and oc story. a believeable excuse for them to like each other. also i really like that you stuck in all those songs. it makes me listen to the song run by snow patrol in a new way :D i can't wait to hear some more!! |
| Superdani 2008-07-11 ch 18, | abuseawesome! thank you! |
| Superdani 2008-01-29 ch 17, | abuseI still can't believe that you're gonna end such an amazing story! Well,just keep with the main plot and maybe some tension between Sylar and Mohinder over her? |
| Esmerada007 2008-01-18 ch 16, | abuseoh, this was so sad... I hope he gets back at the people for giving her the virus and killing his child...can't wait to see more |
| Sy-Sy 2008-01-04 ch 16, | abuseGRAGH! I HATE THE COMPANY! Sylar was all happy about it, and they ruined it! UGH! |
| Sy-Sy 2008-01-04 ch 15, | abuseWow, Bryanna is getting a bit testy. But Mohinder shouldn't have done that anywayz. AND UGH. MAYA IS HERE. I do not like Maya...not ONE bit. But my story says otherwise...ANYWAY. I can't wait to see what Sylar does with Maya, now that YOU have control. |
| Superdani 2008-01-04 ch 16, | abuseo pOor Bryanna. But I'm happy that they're together now. Maya isn't there right? Sylar must be so ** at the company,and Mohinder would be so jealous. |
| Superdani 2008-01-04 ch 15, | abuseOh I don't like them separate! And I don't like Maya! But I'd like to see Mohinder's face when he sees the babys dad! hehe update soon! |
| Superdani 2008-01-03 ch 14, | abuseaw Mohinder...oh man! Sylar must know he's going to be a dad,but from others,not her. And you're not going to make the months grown faster so the baby can born real fast right? |
| Sy-Sy 2008-01-02 ch 14, | abuseCANDICE IS A BE-OTCH. Aw, poor Mohindy...-shrugs- Kay, I'm over it. Sylar...get to her. |
| Sy-Sy 2007-12-30 ch 13, | abuseHEYO! DIDN'T SEE THAT ONE COMING NOW DID WE?!?!? NO SIRE! And, sorry to ruin this, but I think when you were trying to spell 'puking' not 'poking' BUT YES. THIS IS GON' BE GREAT! |
| Superdani 2007-12-30 ch 13, | abuseoh no! no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no ! Bad idea!no baby! I hate it! Please don't Maybe if was some of the doctors of the company who said that to make her to go there,but NO baby! |
| Sy-Sy 2007-12-27 ch 12, | abuseOH HO HO MOHINDY. You gonna heal our Bryanna? Cause that'd be THUPER. But where's Sy-Sy now? |
| Superdani 2007-12-27 ch 12, | abuseOh yeah!I like the fact that she considered this place home. how was your christmas? |
| Superdani 2007-12-21 ch 11, | abuseI don't like it!Why did they fought?oh no! But thank God they come back to their time! |