Two weeks as an insensate. Pretty horrific.

It never ceases to amaze me, really. In the world of fanfiction I have found some of the most horrific and exquisitely painful ways of torturing the characters that we love so dearly; and you call it "character development". Sometimes I swear fanfiction is the gateway to sadism. The more they suffer, the more we eat it up, right? lmfao

I loved it. I've ready many, many, many of your written works here over the last month or so. Once again, I am greatly impressed and look forward to reading more. Thank you so much for all the time and effort you put into these.

Loved reading this story. The action was great, the angst was great, the characters where great. I really liked Winfield and the Osoyoos was cute. And the Shakas were really cute, until they tried to eat Rodney. Ah, Rodney... The Rodney angst made me much happy indeed. Loved the scene where Sheppard includes the ancient ascension device in the naughty device list, and when Rodney was bite and when Ronon let loose the flood of lizards and when Ronon was poking the lizards with a lizard poking stick and then was thinking about shooting them and when Sheppard and Ronon went splat, ok so maybe Sheppard more than Ronon, in the stairway and the infirmary scenes when Rodney's getting annoyed and the last scenes with the chocolate cake and many, many more inbetween, before and after.

Well done with the challenge! I liked it a lot.

Thanks for sharing this with me.

Wow I really liked this story. Actually I have enjoyed several of your stories. The SGA ones anyways. You write really well and your stories have great plots to them. The team stories are just great and I love how you have them all working together to get things done and helping each other. Making sure everyone is ok and stuff. thx so much for posting your stories. I do hope you continue to write.

Very good story and I am glad all is back to normal. Poor Rodney though; but at least he learned how to deal with it until he healed.

I read this piece during the short breaks and in the evening at an SGA convention. Wonderful, as are all of your stories. The idea of Rodney being eaten alive is enough to sent shivers up my spine. I enjoyed every word of this story.

Amazing... Awesome... wel, as mall your fics are ^_^

I loved the final scene in the cafeteria, it's so cozy and familiar and yet there's a sadness and the feeling of just passed ngst and horror... love it.

Uoh!! I loved Rodney's ramblings!! Now I do feel Sorry for him!
And things don't look particulary good for our favorite scientist.

UOh! I lost a lot of updates!

Poor Rodney, you're a mean mean persone... of course, love it ^^

In factI'm feeling worse for John than for Rodney right now.

You said that you were sorry for rambling at the end of chap.15 but I think that it was really well written. Your rambling is so much fun!

No, this can't be good - the skahas have regrouped, Rodney's getting worse by the moment (seeing events from his rapidly diminishing perspective was unsettling) and now the Robot has carried Teyla off. Poor team can't get a break.

Poor Rodney for feeling mortified and helpless and poor Ronon for feeling guilty and helpless - despite his being an extremely effective lizard terminator.

I'm loving the team love and concern - Rodney's asking about Teyla, Teyla asking about Rodney and Shep's concern, etc. Good stuff.

*standing ovation and wild cheering* Bravo! Loved every word! The Rodney whumping was simply delicious :) The team friendship was perfect. Thank you!

Yay! What a wonderful story! I'm glad I waiting until the whole thing was finished, too (sticks out tongue at NT). I think I liked the robot best, although McKay's sensory deprivation sequence was great. The robot reminded me of the Giant Robot in Tom Baker's first story as Doctor Who - the very first episode of Doctor Who that I ever saw!

Thanks for another great ride!

you are brilliant and amazing. To take those five thing and come up with such a terrific story. I love the ending. Love Rodney's lack of fear until he heard Ronon's reaction to the stolen food. Adore the way you had Rodney wake up and how Sheppard handled it. Beautiful, all of it.