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NoxSomnium
2009-10-12 . chapter 24
Poor Remus. No one tell him she's back and he has to find out that his best friend's wife is back from the dead through the newspaper. oh dear.
Iva1201
2009-10-09 . chapter 83
Well, I have to say I am PRETTY SAD )-: after having opened your profile page just now. Sorry to say that but I am also very sure that your other readers will be too. I am waiting and waiting for an update of this excellent story, one of the very few believable and good thought out in LE/SS pairing - and just as I look if I am maybe not missing an update (or maybe some new story of yours), I see that you have abandoned this story, never even submitting a line to people like me waiting out there, hoping for the update, e.g. in a form of short author note in place of chapter 84 as authors usually do when they know they are not finishing the story (or publish sequels).

I mean, I understand that you have cjhanged your mind on not finishing it - I think to remember you wrote somewhere that you wanted to write stuff of your own and probably are doing it just now - or maybe you just somehow lost interest in writing in whole; that can happen to anybody, but it would have been nice to let your readers know.

So, end with my rant. This story shall remain one of my favourites anyway, but know that I deeply regret not being able to see the end of it.
liareh
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
I check your page every third day or so , I think, hoping that there would be an update. It's so silly and yet I keep on doing it and the closer it gets to the 1-year-since-last-update mark, the less hopeful I become and yet, I can't stop myself for checking the next time.

I must have read the story so many times that I think I have started reading ino stuff -like oh, that kid's Babylonian healing symbol will be used to heal Snape's Nagini bie , or, really, is this an anagram of the name, or hey, I didn't notice the last time that Lily hardly ever apologises.

Love your Narcissa - almost makes me wish for a Snape-Narcissa ship - funny , how Snape always ends up having a sad love-life. I really want to read a happy ending for him ( and for heaven's sake,not with Hermione - despite the fact that I have read Snape-Hermione fics - my mind keeps saying - no, no, it's wrong!).

I am all for Lily-Snape and Severitus fics. Please,please,please,update - this is the best and probably, only Lily-Snape novel-length fic worth reading - mus read actually. People wd turn Lily-Snape if they read this.

Happy ending, happy ending please ...
Belle86
2009-10-05 . chapter 67
And just where is her apology?! She started the whole fight! Bringing him back doesn't account for an apology!
Belle86
2009-09-26 . chapter 83
An excellent story! Too bad it hasn't been updated in a while! I hope it's not abandoned. Please write some more!
BurningLionFrozenLamb
2009-09-23 . chapter 8
I just had to stop in the middle of the story and comment on how much I FREAKIN LOVE THIS!

The intensity! The intrigue! I love it! Excellent--the plot line is very elaborate and I love it. Wonderful. Thank you so much for putting this in the world.
Athena Keating-Thomas
2009-08-21 . chapter 83
Well! This story has developed quite interestingly, the changes you've made to the original stories make quite a bit of sense. I hope you're doing well and find the time and motivation to continue writing.

I'll definitely have to look at your other stories. Good luck!
Athena Keating-Thomas
2009-08-21 . chapter 80
*shakes head* You handle the Malfoys so well; their emotions seem more realistic than the drama of the Hogwarts crew sometimes...
Athena Keating-Thomas
2009-08-20 . chapter 64
This was an extremely touching chapter. Somehow, I find myself sympathizing more with Narcissa's plight sometimes than I do with Lily's more brazenly expressed angst. Your plot regarding the Malfoys and how they are handling events are so very well written!
Athena Keating-Thomas
2009-08-14 . chapter 30
Huzzah! Lily could use a less judgemental ear. We'll see how this affects dynamics, however. Heh...
Athena Keating-Thomas
2009-08-14 . chapter 29
Definitely a heartbreaking chapter, especially knowing what's to come and what's likely the cause between the withdrawal...
Athena Keating-Thomas
2009-08-14 . chapter 23
And at last, there is some hope. I've been greatly enjoying this story and felt I must take the opportunity to say "Hi". I'm sure I'll be making a few more comments here and there. ;)

I'm definitely looking forward to certain revelations about certain links between certain people...
Iluvdraco55
2009-06-30 . chapter 83
I'm got addicted and finished what you have so far in two days. It's really good!
Iluvdraco55
2009-06-30 . chapter 83
I'm got addicted and finished what you have so far in two days. It's really good!
pstibbons
2009-05-29 . chapter 3
Glad Lily knew she fcuked up as well.
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