WOW, that's intence, and so very true for some people. This was SO well written, honestly. The emotions were betrayed perfectly. I related to them in an instant, especially the last 6 lines. HM, I AM TOTALLY GOING TO PUT THIS ON MY FAVORITES LIST!
Anyway, yea.
*~shattered-hearts~*

Cool poem dude.

You've got her emotions down well. I'm sure your best buddy loved it. I know I did.