lol, so fricken close to telling him how he feels too...I'd laugh if when the door finally opens, Rei's right in front of it.
Kai: WHA! *jumps and holds his heart*
Rei: Apparently, this elevator is so slow, I was able to get my check up, and walk down the stairs before u got down. ^^
Kai:... *starts slamming his head on the door*
Rei: ACK! KAI!

lol, funny to think of, funny to write ^^. Nice job, hopefully next time Rei will be willing to listen to Kai's undying affection...unless Rei's singing scared it off.
Rei: HEY!

oh my god i love this story so much! Kai's sarcasm is just hilarious! I feel kinda bad for him though. Rei so slow in this story it's hilarious! Ahh . . . I've read it like 4 times ina row and it never gets old. Never stop writing awesome stories!

(*o*)kelseywazhere(*o*)

this is so cute, it has to be one of the funniest stories I've ever read!

This is really cute. I actually hope you dont keep this as a one-shot.

aww..you need to continue this!! who does kai love? ray obviously..but he doesnt know that!!

-cough, cough, snort, cough, cough-
I loved it, it entertained me more than you'd ever know. Poor Kai, cursed to love a boy with moronic tendencies. x3 A little anti-climatic but well fitting end.

-Tanuki

this was funny but why dont u write a sequel

lol nice

aw, so cute ^-^ poor Kai, lol, so close, too. Ray's so adorable in this --> I love your style of writing, the humor and all...pretty much the only peices of writing that make me smile or literly laugh out loud are yours ^-^ [wow, I sound scary]

OMG! Amazing! The ending was great! The descriptions of Kai's behavior was just right too! ~Hoshicat ^_^

this is really cute and funny. I don't want to say this, but Rei talked a bit too much... ahaha, not that's bad. He was so oblivious the whole way and poor Kai is trying to confess only to be interrupted by Rei himself. ahaha. Cute. Nice work!

"I'll be slamming my head against the windshield of your car if you need me."

GOLD, I tell you, GOLD! xD I simply loved this. I really needed a good laugh, and this really cheered me up. xD

"What were you doing before you came to pick me up?"
"Nothing, Ray."
"Oh."

xD Haha, I can hear them saying that. This was so brilliant. Simple, yet hilarious. And when Ray makes that comment about the elevator music. xD haha Fantastic. Just what I needed.

lol, hilarious. keep up the good work! nothing more to say really. . . but I thought you would want to hear a review anyways. sequel?

Aahahahahahahaha! I've read this story a couple times before, but every time I read it, I burst out laughing. Great ending. You've got a great sense of humor. ;)

That is so cool!
The setout of the writing was really effective, and although I usually don't like script style pieces, I love this one.
Kai's part is dead funny too!