 Harry's Scar 2008-01-14 . chapter 1I liked how you added the dialouge so I know everything that's going on. In good books, you need a good amount of dialouge, but not too much. That's exactly what you did. I love Gettysburg, and I liked how you stayed with the same story, but yet you changed it at the end. Great job Freedom Tide! I can't wait untill you come out with another Gettysburg related story. On a scale from 1-10 I would give you a 9. |