|Reviews for Why should the cold pity the worm?|
| ShoujoAnimeFanatic13 12/23/09 . chapter 1
Nice fic XD
Hibird wasnt with him yet at that time, he shows up after the Kokuyo arc
| Tsuki no Akebono 1/19/09 . chapter 1
short yet...wao...i agree with did tsuna mangae to make him feel...pity?wao.*smell air*-i smell 1827 in the air...-but that probably is just me
| Ila Way 9/29/08 . chapter 1
haha! interesting POV! xD
| Strifekun 5/27/08 . chapter 1
Tsunada? I hate to be rude but your story fails just because of your summary. His name is Tsunayoshi. Emphasis on this yoshi part. His nickname is Tsuna. Where did you get Tsunada from?
| hawwari khairin 11/17/07 . chapter 1
It's pretty awesome that u dare to write a ...u should write a long fanfiction that have climax so that the readers will keep reading your fanfiction.
Sorry if I hurt your feeling.
| ChibiKakei 11/16/07 . chapter 1
wow...he seems out of character, very... ruthless. lol. do you have microsoft word? you have some words that don't fit in(like, words that sound similar but are spelled differently) like 'beet' is supposed to be 'beat' and 'there''their'
um, some tenses seemed to be mixed up too, i think it's most noticable when Hibari heads back to the disciplinary room. where you said 'went' which is past tense and then stated that hibari 'contemplate' which is in present tense instead of saying 'contemplated' which fits in better. you switch often between present and past tense, when you write, make sure that it stays in one tense )