I really enjoy writing that comes from an unnamed character. I could tell without knowing the pairing that this was Harry and Draco, but I think it could apply to a lot of other people too. Wonderful Job! I love how you were so detailed and made him so open, even though you did say it was his journal. I loved it!

Wonderful! I love the descriptions of "gray" in the beginning. Just, overall, great job! Thanks for writing! XD

very nice. the philosophy was interesting, but there was almost too much of it, too much repetition at the beginning. the last 3 paragraphs were lovely, though. simply lovely. i really hope to see more h/d work from you. its so hard to come by decent works nowadays that seem to have any grasp on h/d relationships

I love the contrasting! Great work!

Good job! I love it!