kinky lol, i loved it.

this was really good.

i loved it. !

* Um, that was... wow. I think it's a little late for a cold shower. This story is hot, to put it pathetically. I love your characterization, and how you can take this short piece, pack it full of every single guilty pleasure we could ask for, while still managing to gracefully keep it seeming like a complete, sensical plot-driven, entertaining short story. And to quote one of your previous reviewers, who might I say, put it perfectly.

"You have an uncanny ability to see the darkest pieces of the characters' souls and show us the incestuous lusts, the crazed desires, the murderous greed and make us, your readers, really understand."

Sarah

loved it.

*SQUEE*

OMG-that was sexy as all he11! Lucky girl, to have such a yummy studly specimin of a man (her uncle, Peter) that is so into her and wants to be with her forever.

;D

Well done-keep up the good work!

Amazing. I Love this. ! Good job! Write more Paire please!

Great story! I totally enjoyed that. Talk about needing a cigarette. ;-D

omg. so hot. u sold me on paire

I read most of your FF on Heroes, but this one is my fave by far - I love to see Peter so jealous and even a little dangerous. Please carry on writing awesome stories like this one! :)

Nice. I really liked it. Twisted to have Claire set West up. But I hated him any way so its a plus, keep up the good work, hope to see chapter two soon.

MORE!

Whoa. I like this side of Peter, Claire's obnoxious but good job. That was...good.

I love this for the Paire, but I also love the Adam/Claire. It's nice to know I'm not the only one who sees potential in this ship.

Triangle Immortal ship for the win! :D

That was hott. I love dark possessive Peter.

"I will find a way to kill him." made me cream my pants.

You win the internet!

I loved it.

Brandy

absolutely wonderful. i love Paire, and a jealous Peter is just hot! man, i was so uncomfortable during the scene when her two dads are watching that video. it takes true writing talent to make me uncomfortable and say "why did Mohinder have them watch that!" instead of losing sight of the story and saying "why did the writer have to do that!"... if that makes sense. amazing job! keep up the great work!