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| Lukewins 2008-02-08 ch 2, | abuseThis is very good. Maybe a little cheese in places but I still love it, I loved the game and this story just makes it better. Please keep writing and get chapter two up fast! |
| MacePren 2007-12-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseAwesome story!Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Blizrun 2007-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting beginning, if a bit short. As a pointer, though, try to avoid going down the the path of the "lone sniper" cliche. |
| Wesker888 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abusehmm...pretty good intro. looks like it'll make for a good read. i'll keep an eye out for future chapters. keep it up. |