If this takes place at the very end, then Matsuda shot him in the hand.
And isn't L dead? I'm a bit confuzled

Loved it :D I kinda believe that L always knew that Light was Kira, he just never wanted to be sure of it :)

Nice. Emotional and sad, and in character, because at the end of it it just felt like this, like L never really wanted to find out that Light was Kira. And when Light sees him at the very last moment, sniff. I'm rambling, keep it up!

how sad. T.T

Oh so pretty! I missed reading your fics. they're just so emotional.
"He cannot answer. Can he? Lips to the floor, he mouths against marble, experimentally: “I don’t want to die.”" LOVE it!
and the opening and ending lines... are way too fantastic.
"The hand is lowered, and L looks strange with his mouth half open but empty." Oh god. Half open but empty. Such a pretty lyric! (Half Jack!)
I shall stop being fangirlish and finish writing my english essay before i pass out on the computer.

Heh. L is dead before Light is.

D:

And Light can never go to hell or heaven.

Nice story though.

Okay, weirdness for a sec. I started watching/liking DeathNote... a month ago. Then this comes up. For me, that's hugely weird. Anyway.

I like the implications in it. Nothing obvious, but that does seem like more their styles. Present tense is interesting, it does put the reader much more in the moment, an makes the whole scene more personal, almost making meuncomfortable to be invading it. (that's a good thing)

Yours always, Olynara/Kalira/whatever I'm calling myself these days.

wow! i luv the beginning...plezz write more! i

YAY! i'm so glad that an author who's style of writing i adore is writing a DN fanfic lol :D. I loved this fic... it's sad to think that L could've actually been thinking allong those lines...

L...shot him? What? *confuzzled* What I think is happening: Lights dying, it's L's fault, and he's trying to pin the guilt on Light. Maybe?

Confusion aside, I love what you've done with L.

'out of friendship to you, I allowed myself to entertain the notion that I might be wrong. It was all I could do to sustain that tiniest bit of doubt.”'
'“Why did you think the percentages I told you rose so slowly? So that I could never, never be one-hundred percent certain… ”'

Very good. Very, very good.

awesome job! very in-character too! very, very well written for 1 in the morning

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