Slaves weren't bald. They shaved Aly's head because of her blue hair so that people would buy her, but it never mentions it again, and her hair grows out.

please please please continue! i am hooked!

very nice. Looking forward to more

so when will they meet? please update soon I think that this will be a wonderful story.

cool story! I hope you keep writing, because I like how this is going.

Kiwi Jeanne

pretty good, update soon please

very cool.. please continue this story soon cause it's REALLY good and i love it!

good chapter
Kristina

It's good, I'm slightly confused but it is really good (I get confused easy so no worry about that)
Kristina

I like the start of this, kinda different from anything I've read
Kristina

Oh this is so so so good! Please hurry and contiune, I see how it all fits together now! Oh I just love it! Oh please update, I know it says u haven't updated since like last year but u can't have given up on this story cause it rocks!

-AA Battery

That was good, but if he is 16, than why is he a page?

More! More! I really, really like this story!

Another fascinating chapter! *sighs* Now I have to be patient for chapter 4! I'm glad I'm soon-to-discover the reason why Numair had the Dominion Jewel. I seriously didn't know that in the books the slaves are BALD...that would suck. I would hate not having my hair, I'm glad Malvina has hers! Okie, now that I've given all my oh-so-boring input, I'd best be going... Peace, love, and blueberry lollies Eedi

This is great! Very interesting... I can't wait to see what's in store!

Peace,

Me