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Reviews for: Fireworks Within
Horichiusy
2007-11-18 . chapter 1
Aw!! TezukaxOishi!!

Really nice fic ^^ Second chapter... please!!
speadee
2007-11-18 . chapter 1
So the Seigaku team were just playing with their own fireworks right before the real fireworks? The real fireworks weren't supposed to be set off by then?

It is typical of Oishi to start organizing and cleaning up in advance. The others were in character, too.

What was that part with Echizen and the trash bag for? Was it right after the fireworks or the following day?
Anise
2007-11-17 . chapter 1
I loved this it was very sweet, there's not nearly enough of this pairing so it was nice to read something about Tezuka and Oishi! I also really liked your Ryoma, he's such a sneaky little guy I have no trouble picturing him doing this ^_^
These two make such a wonderful couple so I hope you consider writing more of these guys in the future, I would love to read more :)
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