Very cute. I loved it.

woa, you got me real confused towards the ending! i mean, if it's just a dance and she's trying to escape, then you might as well be making a story about me! i can't dance =D

very NICE!

Cute :).

Well, I'm not entirely sure why they were dancing, but I liked it. Also, Temperance stopped caring after her parents left, not before.

Other then that, this was great.

Best of luck, and keep posting!

~Song