I like this.
It's really well written and explores their complicated friendship nicely.

Wow, that was good. The fourth and seventh ones were my favourites, each gorgeous in their own way (one so hopeful and the other just so... sad) but they were all brilliant. It's amazing that in so little words you absolutely showed the progression of their friendship and then the heartbreaking results of its breakdown, but you did. Great :)

You know that soft 'oh' sound that you make when something just takes your breath away? That was what happened to me at the end of this story. It is absolutely stunning. You have captured their characters so perfectly, and left me with such a longing at the end that it is amazing. Thank-you, you've made my day.

Aw! That's so sad! *Cries* That was amazing. Really beautiful writing.

Aw! So sad and cute, good job! I liked it!

Brilliant oneshot! You've really captured the spirit of Lily and Severus and it is beautifully written. Well done!

really moving, also well written

*sob*

Wow. You write so beautifully!! You get into the character while writing, I think. Your stories are just so wondefully written. I love them all. Especially this one.

That was very sad at the end, but very sweet at the beginning. Very realistic, too. I feel very bad for Snape . . . I, too, have fallen for my best friend, and he rejected me . . . The Snape/Lily ship is probably the most personal one for me, and always makes me sad and ache in my chest area. You've doen this superbly. You've caught the defining moments that are small, yet important. Good job.

i like this. it's the first of its kind for me. i love snape and lily, the best. tahnks for writing this. maybe i'll get an inspiration soon to write something cool too.