Hey, great story :)

Well dang, that is a sad ending but it works well with the story you crafted.

OMG you used the ending!! :O

“Come on….let her just say goodbye, he’s four years old”- Omg :( He's only a baby :(

“What?, you mean she’s not in there?” Sawyer humoured, the mans face grew more red and wild with every second that passed, but every second to Sawyer was a second more that Kate had to run and he had to give her ever second he had. “Look…” The officer took a threatening step forward “If you don’t tell me-”- He so wanted to protect her, cause he so loved her! :( He's so cute. *sighs* I want him.

“Listen Sawyer….its Kate…I’ve been trying to find your number all night, Sawyer….Kate died-”- No! :(

James bedroom, he placed himself by his sons little body, his rhyhmatic breathing the same as before- AWW! I love James! He's too cute!!

In the faint distance he could hear the lapping of the shore, and her warm body was beside him as they laid in his enclosed tent.- Omg! That was... too sad! That was just... AW! I didn't see this in the preveiw chap! Its awesome, seriously! :O

I knew what you were gonna do, and its SO awesome! But its still so sad! Although it was the best ending for thihs story, ever!
Ok. I deffo want a sequal, so ideas... you could have Clemantine coming back? James is too cute to just let go!
I'll PM you with more ideas ;)
Its been an awesome fic! Can't wait for the sequal (hint hint).
xox Katie

aww so sad! great chap!

Okay this was awesome! I'm glad I finally had time to read it! Great Job! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Sequel NOW! lol. That was so great! Awesome!

*gasp* she died?! that's so... sad!! but i prefer it more to a happy ending and one very cheesy fanfic... trust me, i'm not a fan of those. ;)
very good writing though. ;) i think that this chapter was your best from all the other ones you wrote on this story, most definitely.
so... you're gonna do a sequel, right? :D *looks demandingly at parisamy* (lol)
bonboni
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It's so sad how the end is =(
I hope skate will not end like this...

But this is my favorite chapter with the first one! Love it!
Sawyer is so desperate and cute with his little boy sniff sniff =(

Wow! Really dramatic, love it. Well done on a fab fic and hope to read more of ur stuff soon!

Oh no! They finally found Kate :(
Please say that somehow mysteriously (i don't know how) that murder charge is dropped and Kate is free!:D
But i will doubt that happens because after all this is Kate and Sawyer, their lives are never simple ;D

Anyway LOVED this chapter!! Update soon!x

Is Kate going to hand herself in? Love the Sawyer-James interaction!
This is where i would say update soon but there is already another chap! yay! Gonna review the next chapter now!!

I keep forgetting to review on this but I have been enjoying the story.

Well done! I liked the 'children war,' and the end was very dramatic.

Well done again!

:O you've gotta be joking me!
oh this is so bad! i really hope that they can think of something quick and get away before the police take her to jail... i really hope they do!
oh and also, i really loved seeing sawyer amongst all those children and mothers trying to fit in with everyone, that was hilarious!
update soon please!
bonboni
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OMG! UPDATE SOON! That was so good! UPDATE SOON!