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| zotlot 2008-06-25 ch 1,  | abuseI hope this will be continued! |
| silk360 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cute! Good Job! |
| A penname like no other 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuse"he suddenly came down with a bad case of dead." I love it, the quote and the story that is. It's defiently going in the right direction, I would love to read more of this. |
| redhead-saxophone 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abusevery well written, your portrayal of Liselle seems to fit perfectly. way to go |
| The Wineglass 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseAww... so sweet... but only one chapter? Where're all the interesting bits? Go update... I'm looking forward to more; it's well written. |
| Sketchy Cannabis 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! I think you got Silk down very well. His Silk-comments were very well done. ;) |
| foxymalon64 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseaw this is adorable. i love it! liselle sounds so cute as a little kid. please update! |
| Everbloom-Karisa 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet! I love their interaction! |
| ArcGreen 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseGood start, Silk and Velvet were always my favorite. =) |
| Catalin 2007-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, this is really very good! Not only is the idea itself interesting, the style and interaction between the characters seem almost perfect to me ("almost", because there are some very minor things there, like "a short little man" or "gathered as much as the man as..."). Again, very nice piece of work, I hope I'll see more of that! |