hahaha, my gosh! that was so funny!

i had tears for laughing so hard =]

i love this chapter! their so cute when their lil

I loved the story. Chapter One was very funny and Chapter Two was just so cute.

TOO CUTE! I love their parents reactions to when they were playing! You're a great author. :D

Alright. You want to know what I thought of the story.

Chapter 1: FUNNIER THAN HELL!! Well, Hell isn't funny, but you get what I mean. Inoichi, Chozi, and Shikaku were priceless.

Chapter 2: SO CUTE! -squee-

Ok. All in all, it was great. 100/100

Lol very cute. Loved the part about Shika's first word:P

Poor Shikamaru and Chouji, Ino was a spitfire! Loved it.

really cute! and love the mood swings at the beginning... poor shika won't get any sleep!

I like the first chapter SO much! It is hyterically funny...

Not sure about the second chapter though...

really sweet and yet feisty. poor shika was right-his life would indeed be troublesome!

Man that was to funny.I'm still layghing.Wow Ino has a mouth.That was awsome you need to write more stories like these.
Great story.-MaiomilovesShikamaru

GOOD STORY!

Aaw, this was heaps of fun! I love team ten :3 The comparisons between the older generation and their kids was awesome. thanks for this story :3

*puts on favourites*

wicked funny. nicely done in character.