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Reviews For: The Portrait

Ne'ith5
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuseA very delicate handling of the issues, the story was sensitive and handled with the dignity of the fictional characters in mind as well as the actual readers today.

There was enough in it to make you think about the choices pioneers and their champions make as well as the sacrifices they make. Misappropriated guilt was also sensitively handled and brought to a satisfying conclusion.

All in all one of the best stories I've read about slavery in and out of fan fiction. You made some good points without turning off your audience on either side of the issues unless of course they have their own axes to grind.

Well done!
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