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| VeracityTK 2007-12-15 ch 14,  | abuseThanks SpottedHorse. I enjoyed this from start to finish. Keep up the Brass Cath fic writing, there's not enough of it around! You handled their characters very authentically. |
| Rebecca 2007-12-13 ch 14, anon. | abuseSorry to see you end this one sooner than you wanted to, but I do like how you wrapped it up though. I look forward to reading your new fic though. |
| krjemb 2007-12-13 ch 14, | abuseI'm sorry to see this story go. But you wrapped it up nicely. But I wish Catherine had gotten a go at Ellie. And for Ellie to cut her dad a break. Maybe if she knew the truth she could see the past as an adult. But I never really understood the character of Ellie all her actions seem to be based on getting back at Jim, but she's only hurting herself. And if she really wanted to get back at him she'd turn her life around and then ignore him. |
| beaujolais 2007-12-12 ch 13, | abuseFinally, I can submit a review! Jim trying to recover his memories of Ellie and his past life with Nancy was very nicely done! Too bad Ellie is still a witch. |
| Kristafied 2007-12-11 ch 12, | abuseArgh! Cliffy! It's nice to see Brass with someone who loves him. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| krjemb 2007-12-09 ch 11, | abuseI Could see Catherine getting thorough to Ellie because of her past. Catherine wasn't a hooker but she was a stripper and that gives her a closer frame of reference to Ellie than her dad. And Cath was on drugs so she's proof that you can turn yourself around. Plus Cath will not put up with Ellie's crap or the way she treats Jim. That's a confrontation I'd love to see. |
| Rebecca 2007-12-09 ch 11, anon. | abuseI care! I don't want to see things go smooth for Ellie, at least at first...I love the angst with her and Jim, and tossing Cath into the mix should be very interesting, especially how Ellie ran off in WtG and Cath was standing right there. I would love to see something brought up about that... |
| beaujolais 2007-12-05 ch 9, | abuseI like how Ellie has figured into this and how Jim is trying to remember. Now Jim and Catherine are going to L.A.? That should be interesting. |
| Rebecca 2007-12-04 ch 9, anon. | abuseThis chapter was just right. I am really happy that Cath is helping him through all of this. I can't wait for the trip to L.A. (hint, hint!). |
| Rebecca 2007-12-04 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh, I loved this chapter. I was hoping you were going to dive deeper into the Ellie thing, and you didn't disappoint. I love how you have Gris and Cath filling his memories in. Makes me wonder if he will ever remember anything from his past. Can't wait for more. |
| yanukjc 2007-12-02 ch 8, | abuseGreat story line! Please don't keep us in suspense for too long, we want to read more! :) |
| krjemb 2007-11-30 ch 7, | abusePlease continue. There's something about Brass and Catherine that really works. |
| VeracityTK 2007-11-30 ch 6, | abuseStill on track. Dying for the next installment. Poor Jimmy needs some TLC and needs Catherine to show him just how good they are together. |
| Rebecca 2007-11-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseYou are still very much on track. I love him going through the photo album and getting filled in on the past. Of course, you have to keep up the chemistry between these two! Love it. |
| sadie 2007-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseyeah Purejoy is another name. comming from their names in Greek i think. Catherine means pure and gill means joy. They are also called Grillows |