Very good, very intense. A good ride.

"Maybe some day we'll have our chance."

Oh, poor Gary!

Poor Gary ...

Poor Gary is a mess!

Whoa ... very intense few chapters.

I liked it.

Your knowing references to Chicago add so much to the plausibility of the story.

This chapter is a nice set up to what is to come.

I like the Armstrong and Toni characters and dialogue.

Great first chapter. I want to read more. :)

I like the way you handle suspense. You've got everything moving right away, and there is feeling for the characters. I've never watched the show, but with the way this is written, it needs no outside explanation.

Yet another great story. Not like I'm surprised anymore :-) Thanks again for sharing those great stories with us! BTW, I checked out that other author you told me about, but I haven't read any of her stories, yet. For the sake of my eyes I need to take a break before I do. But I will read them soon. Thanks.

This was a great story and I loved it! I actually read it all the way through and past my bedtime! *grin* Luckily I have late classes tomorrow! Is this the last chapter, or is there going to be one more? I know it says complete but it almost seems as if one more chapter is needed.

*nudge* What happens next?

This is the second Early Edition fic Ive read and I must say, well done sir! the pace is great and I love how everything is turned up to eleven! pure action!

Yeay! I completely forgot about this story from waiting for an update for so long, but now I must fall to my knees and thank you for all the updates I just got to read! The Toni and Gary intimate scenes were sweet! Please update soon! I can't forget about this again. :)