I loved it. It was a really good fic

wow, what a great story! Must save.

wow, this was masterfully done.
I really liked this pairing.
Making Naruto and Gaara seem like the bad guys really added toe the story's atmosphere.
I'm so happy that they both liked.^^
This was awesomly done!
KAK

Wha... wow. That... hm... I don't know what to say about that...

aww, real sweet. ^ ^

uwa~ this fic is so awesome! I absolutely love it! =D

I LOVED this story, KisaZetsu are one of my all time favorite pairings, but I absolutely hate, detest, loathe Mashi Kishimoto for killing off the Akatsuki, they are my life, and my only reason to live!!

Breath taking. Beautiful. Awsome. x3

I LOVE THIS PAIRING. Thank you for writing this, people usually take it too far and pair Zetsu with a tree and Kisame with a goldfish. Kudos to you!

Myself and a friend of mine had been wondering when someone would do this pairing, and I just discovered your one-shot now. To say you did it brilliantly would be an understatement. You took a very difficult and bizarre pairing and with just a touch of imagination you turned it into a sweet heartwarming love fic.

I also think the idea of making Naruto and Gaara look bad was excellent. You made it really seem as if you were looking at things from the sides of Kisame and Zetsu.

The timing was slightly confusing but overall the story flowed beautifully. The phrase 'through it all' fit perfectly. Congratulations on a very well done one-shot

Keep up the good work!

June
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KisaZetsu it's great. No problems with that XP. But it's pretty random Owo.

Whatever, i'm happy about not being the only who thought of it. Yay for you XD

See you.

what a wonderful story.

Wow you wrote such a beautiful story *sniffs* or maybe the lack of sleep is affecting me... anyways you've done a good job. Kudos!!

AW! It's sweet... and makes me laugh XD! The time was a bit odd... but I like it.

I actually liked this story and I don't often like shonenai. Really. This was very sweet and cute and I really liked it. You did an excellent job on a shaky source! +1!