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| aPeurDeFISH1412 2008-01-30 ch 4,  | abuseInteresting. It's nice to see a fic set in some historical time period. Why does Shinichi wear glasses? I guess that'd be more like Conan-kun :] So Heiji's off at war (haha; go figure; samurai/kendo skills) I wonder if Kaito's gonna make an appearance. After all, Hakuba already did. Ganbatte! |
| Fyliwion 2008-01-09 ch 4, | abuseAwesome! Awesoem chapter ^_^ And I personally like the evil Eisuke *cackles* XDXD Very neat! |
| magicbulletgirl 2008-01-08 ch 4, | abusereply @K: fixed. Let's all hope I don't write 2008 or 2007 next time-^^- |
| k 2008-01-08 ch 3, anon. | abusehi i just noticed that in ran's august 6th diary entry u have it dated 2007 :) but i love this story - please update sooner! |
| Sakurakitty2 2008-01-08 ch 4, | abuseI liked this chapter, can't wait for the next ;) |
| Rani07 2008-01-08 ch 4, | abuseWonderful! ^^ I really do hope you can update soon! n-n |
| anaime7 2008-01-08 ch 4, | abuseye, eisuke-kun is evil! beware all! it's still kinda weird on how Shinichi has glasses though...loved it! update more! |
| Sheiryy 2008-01-08 ch 4, | abuseHAHA I liked the last paragraph XD Update soon please..!! >_< And good luck =D |
| Kaito-neechan 2008-01-08 ch 4, | abuseHahahah! Magic-chan, you're so good *laughs* I truly enjoy reading this story, it's simple and neat, and has atmosphere! |
| Fyliwion 2007-11-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseI dunno if I've actually gotten a chance to tell you yet... but I LOVE this btw ^_^ It's so neat, and such a different perspective- and a different time for an AU. But I really love it ^_^ Awesome awesome fic! |
| Rani07 2007-11-23 ch 3, | abuseAh I thought the names sounded familiar!! xD Anyway, in my opinion, I don't think Ran's getting OOC... I'd believe that if she were to fall in love while she's betrothed, then she would become confused and a bit frustrated for sure! But maybe if you want to make her situation easier to understand, or to make her even Less OOC, you could just say that her parents set up a marriage with this Jin, and therefore, she wouldn't even have to like the guy in the first place.. maybe? xD Just a suggestion! n__n Wonderful chapter!! Ran and Shin-chan are beginning to establish a friendship..! n//n Update soon, pretty please! |
| anaime7 2007-11-23 ch 3, | abusesoo kawaii~~aw...ran-chan falling for shinichi-kun...! |
| EffisheiRan 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWow... Shinichi is a post man? I'venever thought of that idea before... Although, It's very unique! :) Can I ask you a question? Do you upload Detective Conan mangas in I just saw your pseudonym (hope I spelled it right) at one of the chapters there, and thought I'd heard it before. Please tell me... :) |
| Sakurakitty2 2007-11-23 ch 3, | abuse:)...hehe I liked it! I don't really think Ran is getting way out of character...it is okay if she goes a little OOC form time to time :) Update soon please! |
| Sakurakitty2 2007-11-23 ch 2, | abuse:D poor Shinichi...Ran will ike him eventually :) |