I really liked this. Perhaps you should write a sequel though. I really want to find out how they would act the next day.

How lovely! Interesting subject matter; nicely characterized; charming ending.

I loved this. I like that you took something said in Pygmalion and turned it into a reality! Awesome!

He he! Gorgeous ending! Well done.

Wow! Pickering's getting quite a show. I LOVE the Gollum-type dialogue going on inside Henry's head! :)

Pickering is a darling. :) I have to get to the next chapter! It's looking great so far.