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Essteka
2009-03-02 . chapter 15
(making tears) I think I'm gonna cry...

Wow... I mean... Wow... That was... excellent... I loved it. I mean... My God! That chapter was simply one of the greatest chapters you've made for that story so far! I simply loved it very much! Everything was good! First, we have Daffy who doesn't help Rika and Porky at all at the beginning. Second, we have Kuro's team who are saying that "Twillight" was bad. Third, we have Yoshi's scene where his eyes were pleading to Kuro. Fourth, we have the Janitor who is making something funny (yeah, that was hilarious too!). Fifth, after they give up, we have a flashback to Toon Town's early days with that song from "Cars", which contain Daffy's meeting with Bugs, cameos of several other classic cartoon characters, their reactions when they see the newer cartoon characters coming, and Daffy leaving Toon Town and ending his friendship with Bugs (very emotionnal and my favorite part). Sixth, we have Daffy who is crying about not giving up and the others agreeing to restore Toon Town another time. Seventh, we have Bugs who talk during a ceremony about Toon Town's restauration. Eight, we have a good ol' Bugs/Daffy moment who reminds me a lot of that scene at the end of "Looney Tunes: Back in Action". And at least but not last, we have the citations coming from six of the greatest cartoon legends ever. I'm very impressed here, NL. I'm freaking serious about that. Congratulations for this fantastic chapter!

Other than "Well, update soon!", I've nothing else to say.
Tomahawk41
2009-03-02 . chapter 15
Dude, this had to be the best chapter you've written for this part of the series. The comedy and action were both very well-timed, and it was nice you included the Ajax Detectives, too. The inclusion of "Our Town" was very cool, too, I enjoyed that (I'm a huge James Taylor fan). But I think the best part was the way you portrayed Daffy; sure, it may have seemed a bit out of character, but it definately shows you a different side of Daffy; a side that shows he's truly dedicated to Toon Town.

Awesome job, dude! Keep it up!
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 14
Poor cartoon stars, with the newies getting all the attention, it's hard for great stars like Bugs Bunny to enterain anymore. I love how you handle it. Great job.
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 13
Well, the arc went out fine, especially the musical number with my fave number (poor June, with people often thinking she's Chinese). Great humor.
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 12
Another funny chapter, with the songs and craziness and so forth. Hope Rika turns out fine. The story is getting thrillsville!
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 11
Well, I like how you done the chapter, very well done. It's funny how Danny doesn't get it that June just want to live by herself even though the two are dating. The Aids song was hilarious, though I think the whole singing is getting out of well. Oh well, that's fan-fiction biz!
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 10
Whoa, once again, very nicely done chapter. I like how you use the characters. The song about poo...weird, but effective. Time now for the next chapter!
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 9
Cute, very cute with the whole song thing especially with you and Rukia as usual. And good use on...THE JANITOR! Well done as usually.
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 8
And even though it was too late to review this last Christmas, this story was well done as usual! I enjoy the use of the SpongeBob Christmas song and it's cute how Danny is still crushing on June. Anyway, Merry Christmas (even though it's too late) and Happy New Year (too late, man am I slow).
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 7
(applauds) Bravo, bravo, No Limit 5, for the fighting, the singing, and the whatnot.

Mystery: Whatever you...

Me: Shut up, Mystery! Anyway, the whole thing is well done and well-executed.

Bender: Hey, watch with the executed crap!

Me: Anyway, will continue to review! Ciao!
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 6
Yikes! The story has a suspenseful ending! In a humor story like this, that said something. Very nice job!
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 5
Very nice chapter like all the other ones. I also like the use of the Robot Mafia even though I rarely seen much of Futurama. Too bad someone tried to whack the boss of the gang. I will continuing read and reviewing this story in hopes to give you the reviews you would want.
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 4
Nice job on this chapter, NL5 (all right if I call you that?). It's great to see the heroes getting some extra help on their first case. Oh, I think I know those two hidden guys but I'd let you folks at home figure that one out. Peace out!
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 3
Right, another well done character and a lot of craziness, man! I like how you brought the best characters this world has seen like SpongeBob, Groundskeeper Willie (Okay, not thge best) and the Soup Nazi? Classic Seinfeld! Now to see our heroes' first case!
JusSonic
2009-01-10 . chapter 2
All righty, nicely done with this. It is very well written by someone like you. The whole mess the Porky and Daffy got themselves into are always a laugh. Now for the next chapter.
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