Please please please continue!

She instantly grabs his collar and smacks him as hard as she could.

"What the hell, woman—!"

She started beating him up. "Don't do that again, you bastard!" Smack! "You wanna die!" Pak! "Who the hell are you calling baby, huh!" Slap! "Hitting on random women!" SMACK! "What kind of a man, are you, huh!" SMACK! SLAP! "You really want to die by my hands that much, huh? HUH!"

From the jail cell, the huge men with an overdose of tattoos were at awe with her feminist way. "Why are you beating up our pretty boy! Hand him over to us!" their hands were outstretched outside the spaces in betweens of the jail bars. "Do not lump his body, you man-hater! We'd love to be the ones banging him! Give him to us!"

Sakura glanced their way and glared. "This man," she slightly raised Sasuke, "is mine." She turned to face the prey in her hands. "We already spent two nights together, right, handsome?" she sweetly purred.

Sasuke choked in whether displeasure or pleasure, he could not say. The underlying pretense in her words was too much for him to handle. At that moment, she was too hot for his eyes and his own good.

LOL. I luv this

LOL! That was hilarious! A little bit hard to follow, but so funny! Hopefully you can update soon...

Holy crap! THAT'S HILARIOUS! PHEEEWWWW! -sigh- Oh, tear...

OMG-spazz- I LOVE YOU. This is like, the best I've read today. XD The way Sasuke is acting makes me laugh so hard! NICE JOB!

Meron ba lima sa susunod?

hmmm... without looking into ur pro-po (profile) i'm guessing tht ur a filipino, huh? judging by the chapter names ] I'm a filipino 2 btw P Oh and gr8 story!

oh GEEZ, i cant stop laughing XD

rofl

brilliant, continue!

:D

brilliant, as always

It's funny really funny, but keep in mind that you are walking a fine line of T-M ratings.

.LOVE.

lol i love your chapter names! :D

Nevermind, I just read the disclaimer. Regardless, this isn't very original, and I can see all the plot lines from the movie being played out in here to the most accurate detail.

I know I'm sounding quite negative right now, but honestly, this isn't your work, by writing this, it insinuates that you hold the creative juices behind the work.

I believe I've seen this in a K-drama once before. I don't remember the name, but every scene seems to be based off of it. This seems more like a plagiarized story to me.

cool...plz UPDATE SOON! :)

i love this so much its so funny i was like crying because i was laughing so hard!