Little girls aren't meant to read about male sex and love it.

okay its been like a long time since this was posted but i wanted to review anyways.
i love the idea of this story and it came out good.
but the end was kind of left hanging.
like you sort of lost the end where it should leave with with undersatnding of the story it left you blank.
like i didnt know that you were trying to get out how unsure sirius is and confused about loving his guy best friend untill i read you authors note at the end.
im really not trying to flame...
sorry if its coming out that way.
because i really do like this alot.
again sorry if i sound mean... :(

It was very intense! I think I get what you where going for. ^_^

I really loved it!!
I love the siriusxremus!
You have done a great job with this fic.
I hope taht I will read more of your fics.

so beautiful. the only problem i had was with the verb tense change you went through in the the paragraph under "Pad-Sirius."

I seriously loved this so so so so so much. incredible.

Well written, but I'm not sure if I liked it. The puppies are meant to be together, and I don't want them to think otherwise.

it was obvious that that was what you were trying to do, so fear not! i understood. and it was lovely. i really enjoyed reading.

i really rather like this. the "boys weren't meant to" was a nice device, because i think it purveys how conflicted sirius is about what he's doing, but also how much he is getting out of the experience. very angsty, but not whiny, i liked it a lot. well done, you!

It was interesting. I think the idea translated well onto the page and I'm always a fan of angsty one shots.

I understood, and I really enjoyed. It was more than random smut (which I injoy too, don't get me wrong ^.^), but it had some feeling behind it too.

Loved it. I totally got what you were trying to do. Beautifully written.

Oh I totally got what you were going for. I loved it...
Although I'm not sure Sirius would ever BE uncertain, but I can see how it's plausible...
Anyhow, lovely story, I liked the way it flowed...
And it all came together nicely at the end...and gentle smut is nice too. XD
-allison-

I completely loved this. A perfect way to write their first time. Very good job!

This kind of resembles ever-lasting chocolate, if you catch my drift.

wow, great story!