 Musette Fujiwara 2007-12-01 . chapter 12lol
I loved how everything happened specially what Krillin come to conclude after watching that... |
 Obelisk of Light 2007-12-01 . chapter 12*giggles* Vegeta and his soft spot for Bra ... The other shoppers had better run for their lives ... |
 Yondaime-dono 2007-11-30 . chapter 12**chokes with laughter**
I wasn't expecting that. Otherwise, I wouldn't have read it while recovering from a sinus infection. It hurts to laugh...and I think I just woke up everyone in the house with my banging on the computer desk and coughing.
Consider my pain a testament to how effective that was. :P |
 discordchick 2007-11-30 . chapter 12hahaha! That was definatly different from your others! It was awesome though! Black friday is the worst thing ever, anyone having ever worked in retail or at any mall in general will know this haha. btw bra and vegeta are so cute! >. |
 Obelisk of Light 2007-11-26 . chapter 11*sighs* Poor Goku and Gohan ...
I like the way you've given depth to Goku's character and not taken the overused path of making him look foolish. I'm loking forward to more IC (and cheerful) drabbles. |
 Musette Fujiwara 2007-11-24 . chapter 11wow...
I loved it...
and you used a very ethic concept in this one, about the hero and six billion lives for one...
to bad that remmebered be of college... |
 Musette Fujiwara 2007-11-20 . chapter 10wow...
a little confusing...
but I liked it... |
 Obelisk of Light 2007-11-20 . chapter 10I wasn't expecting an 18/Trunks ... that apart, this was another good drabble from you. I like surprises like these in fics ...
I'm going to be extremely nitpicky here and pick out one paragraph that sounds awkward:
His father died yesterday, his third and final death. Of natural causes this time, so the Dragonballs are useless (I have always wondered why they can resurrect those who die of unnatural causes, yet cannot reverse the modifications on my body that have made me wholly unnatural and unable to die.).
Maybe you could remove the brackets because the sentence seems too long to be put into brackets. I think it'll look better without them.
As always, I eagerly await for more of these little gems from you. :D |
 discordchick 2007-11-19 . chapter 10I DONT GET IT! btw I love all of the other chapters of this story. Really good. But this one confuses me. Who is the person he's with...and I dont lke that his sister commited suicide. Great story, more please ^.^ |
 Obelisk of Light 2007-11-19 . chapter 9Nice drabbles, dear ... nice variety. I've observed most of them are Saiyan-centric ... or rather, Vegeta-centric. I'd love to see some Namekian-centric short fics from you. Keep up the good work, and good luck in getting over the writer's block! |
 raditz65 2007-11-18 . chapter 9Once again, a great writing from a great author |
 Vladgurl 2007-11-18 . chapter 9wow, I really like these. You're very descriptive. Good job. |
 Musette Fujiwara 2007-11-18 . chapter 9Awesome...
They are so funny...
I loved it... |