this story was weird... i like it :D

This sounds really, really good!

“This is so not going in my blog.”

Best. Line. Ever.

XD

Looking forward to the next update! (Sorry it has taken me so long to get to this one, meeps!)

hahahhaha XD
awesome chap ;)
post up soon!! ! ! !

Lover, you did a great job with this! :D It came across so polished; the cadence, the little things you commented on, the points where you stopped telling the story and moved to the next scene while still having the past scene play out in the reader's mind -- Well done! ^_^

Looking forward to more -- and I do hope it comes soon! *^_^*

You make me feel so sad for Ursa, though, with all the little details... ^^;

cool!
I like it ;)\
plz continue:)