Oh, that was wonderful! Kaoru is my second favourite character (Kyouya being my first), it was great to read a little something from his point of view. I'd image his situation would be quite troubling, with Hikaru slowing drifting away from him. It's so sad. :( Anywhoo, great job! :D

I enjoyed this very much. Always thought Kaoru deserved more love. Give him more TLCs? Hope to read more from you. Cheers :)

Oh, new fandom. Very nice! It seems you've managed to pull off that difficult second tense again, good job!

And I can see what you mean when you say that people would be put off by a pairing of two twins. however, I'm rather open-minded and can look past that to see what a great job you've done of writing this kind of relationship.

It's always good to see that writers are broadening their horizons, and I can tell you're doing a great job if it. Well done!