OwO
that was beautiful...that's all i can say..i loved it...oh...that was so sexy..m...pein..itachi...naruto...my dream pairing!! ;D
m...that was just...great
i liked how naruto loved itachi, yet he wanted pein too..that was just..like the best thing ever ^^

That was such an amazing story. Brilliant.
You have such a calming command over the words. I like how the speech was so formal and flowing, like this all took place so long ago where there was more eloquence in every conversation. I loved it!
And the last line, Konoha be damned, just ended it perfectly. No one messes with Naruto. :) Namikaze Naruto, that is.

Great story, keep up the amazing work.

This was a good story hehe I wonder what would happen later when it all came out to Konoha.

Awesome story hun! Really enjoyed reading it. No sequel though? Didn't see one, just wanted to double check. ^_^ ::waves:: Much luck with your other writings!! JA!

is there going to be another chapter or sequel to this?

i dont know how many times ive reread this since the first time ive read it but its a crapload and i must say, you wrote one of the best and well written stories or threeshot, w/e u want to call it, ive ever read. you had info yet not a soo much in one that is was intresting and amazing to read. the progress of the relationship was at a fantastic rate and the relationship and bond btwn sasuke was done beautifully. i am trully a huge fan of your stories.

love the story please update soon. I love how the four main characters act.

Another gorgeous one! Nicely done.

Amazing story. It was so complex and well thought out...I loved it! And even though you made it slightly AU and OOC, you didnt stray to far from the characters' personalities and I liked that. Excellently done.

holy crap that was freaking hot...jesus who new pein+itachi+naruto=hot sex.geez im just shocked

that was awesome

Gods, this was addictive from the get go. I hope you'll work on this and others soon. You've got a new fan here! lol

I have followed two of the Inuyasha ones on as well and am interested in the rewrites. Please don't abandon this one. It's too good.

This was awesome. You just thought of every single detail to develop a uniqe story. i don't have enoush experience to judge a story very well, but i can say this was completly great. Everything went according to the series, but at the same time it was a completly different universe. Your ideas connected perfectly, and you were able to clear them all in just 3 chapters. I personally loved it. Thanks for a greaat story!

nice i liked it

Wha, this story is amazing. So detailed; the characterization is so perfect. I love the fact that Naruto and Sasuke are still so close even when Naruto falls in love with Itachi and Pein.

All in all, this is the best "Naruto joins Akatsuki" story ever. Thanks for the great read! Definitely a favorite. :)

You rock!

I love the ending to this - sent shivers running down my spine.