Reviews for Fight for Life: Rise of the Forsaken

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Vilkath 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abuseI rather like this idea, it has a lot going for it. I like the fact it was set rather late in the Naruto series, a naive idiot Naruto would not fit into this Ranma's life to well but also not 'post canon' setting like so many others where it is set after Naruto became the next hokage or what ever. Personaly I think it is one the best time frames for stories, it has Naruto starting to man up, but it's before all the Sasuke loving in the shipoden arc. Over all I really hope this fight for life story continues, it itnroduces one the major recuring characters, Naruto. As such I think it be really important to better explain how he joined up and what happend. Perhaps one the greatest flaws of the Fight for Life series is how just about none the storie are completed and the 'sequals' refrence things that have not even happend yet, introduce characters the readers don't know etc.
Arsao Tome 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuseWhat's up 'Natzi-Naruto'? I seen the pic.
chaosfan0 2008-06-14 ch 2,	abuseAwesome Chapter, I have just registered today but had read youre stories for a good while before, it is KICKASS! You want some advice/votes for what Naruto the Soldier should/could do? Kick Sasukes ** (nearly everyone wants it) Clan "Meetings", other's perspective of the new clan. Make Naruto give the council the finger before walking out and the room blows up Maybe bashing? Or cold analylictal view spoken by Ranma as he argues with Jirayia, Kakashi or Teams in general about Konoha's faults as well as the rest of the "ninja world" "We are Ninja. We are the 'backstabbers'. We who fight in the shadows, that rule shouldn't only be ANBU." Naruto/Ranma spoke. Are you going to post a chapter in Chaos Style of Ranma and Warhammer crossover or would it be a new story entirely? Naruto get's harem of Kin, Haku, (maybe Hinata), Tenten and Tayuya. I want to read a scene of Kimminaru (Bone guy) being revived by Ranma (ch.1 before revising explained several of Ranma's moves, one was Impure World ressurection.) Ranma would like/appreciate his devotion and loyalty. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
DeltaKyuubi 2008-06-13 ch 2,	abusecool story cant wait till you update
Sefirot 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseAmazing fic. I'm disappointed that this fic don't has the amount of review's it deserves. The story is very different form other Naruto/Ranma xovers I have read. Update soon please
snoopycool 2008-05-28 ch 2, anon.	abuseThe Chaos Undivided Legion? i think it should be The Chaos United Legion and the demon that follows ranma... can you make then more "badass" or "cool"? i do not consider a wooden golem or a ghost to be a worthy servant to ranma (maybe a ghost dragon thingy or a golem made from lava or pokegirls)
Sano-Sama 2008-05-15 ch 2,	abusekick ** as usual Keep it up love ranma naruto works
Iseriad 2008-05-13 ch 2,	abuseI want to join the chaos clan! no seriously it sounds like fun, and honestly i kinda have no problem with inflicting bodily harm up to and including death on a person... oh well doesn't exist in this dimension. can't wait for the other chapter although you could try to make naruto get info on his marriage.
Mark20020 2008-05-11 ch 2,	abuseinteresting
Pryde Kitty 2008-05-10 ch 2,	abuseWow! This was a great chapter as per always! I can NOT wait for the next chapter! I also LOVE the fact that you NEVER skimp out on your chapters, like some authors do. It really bothers me when I have to wait a week or more, and all I get is like 5 pages...instead of the previous 10+ pages they did before. Also I can't wait to see how Naruto's new position, and Ranma's clan will effect the people of Konoha! I also can't wait to see Sasuke get his ** handed to him >=)
Wildfire60 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseIs it just me, or does everything you write kicks **?!
TenWings 2008-05-07 ch 2,	abuseAs alwas your work KICKS **!
Isatis00 2008-05-07 ch 2, anon.	abuseMy aunt gave me this one. She called it the STCOS, or Subspace Transparent Computer Operating System. But I just call it SubTrans Computer, or STC for my own shortcut Path of Chaos by Lord Rance Subspace Transparent Multi-Operational Computer System or STMOCS for short. A holographic crystallized laptop appeared and Ranma typed on it rapidly. He left a homing beacon on and sent a message to them. You story Multi Operational? Not very original dude but I'll give you kudos for the rest of the chapter. Peace out
Akira Stridder 2008-05-06 ch 2,	abusehahah lol...kol
Akira Stridder 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abusehaha..

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