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BlueChic
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseLoved it!
A Parliament of Owls
2007-03-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was a very nice Gary/Misty fic. In fact, I think I actually like the pairing now because of it. Your use of "lye" made me laugh though. I think your looking for 'lie.'
kittenluvur55369
2006-12-08
ch 1,
abuseswet
raichurai
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseOMG. xD This was HILARIOUS...I laughed throughout the whole fic, I love this kinds of fics!

'Maybe if I kick it far away, Gary thought frantically, she’ll think it ran away!

Gary lifted his foot to give Togepi the boot.'

HAHA...the things he would do to prevent Misty from kicking his **, I'd probably do the same thing. xD


“I was just thinking,” she smiled at him, “I lost a bike today, but I gained someone who can drive me anywhere in his car--which is better--and a slave for life.”

“I’ve just kissed the devil, haven’t I?” Gary smirked.

Couldn't have a better ending! Great job, this is totally going in my faves!
romancerox
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abusecute story, im not that much of a misty/gary fan, but this is ok
kehcy
2006-06-22
ch 1,
abuse=D cute.
aww poor gary. LMAO i love how he kept calling togepi an omelet/eggo =P
good job! ^^
Fanficluv7Inu
2006-02-18
ch 1,
abuseOMG, ILUVIT! Gary and Misty? Wierd, but sweet combanation! never thought about THOSE 2.. owell, UPDATE!
librastar
2005-11-10
ch 1,
abuseLUV IT! so cute n funny
Maia's Pen
2005-09-26
ch 1,
abuseHaha! Nice fic! I liked the 'smooth criminal' song selection - SO GARY! ~_^

0_0 HAHAHA: -C’mon, Misty, let mama-Brock take care of you.- WTF? THAT was FUNNY!

And this: - “Well I asked nicely,” Delia bit her lip” HAHAHAHA! I’m sure she did!

O! Shame on Gary: - Maybe if I kick it far away, Gary thought frantically, she’ll think it ran away!-

*gasps* HAHAHA: “Whoa,” Brock did a double take as they walked in, although Gary could have done the same as Brock stood clad in a frilly pink apron and a rather femme bandana, but only one would double take at a time. And plus Gary was carrying Misty. Double taking would alter his perfect balance.- THIS IS FUNNY! F-U-N-N-Y!

*giggles madly* Misty is making Gary he slave for a week! Brilliant! I wish I’d thought of this!

EW: _ “C’mon,” Brock grinned, “one night with Brock the Rock and you’ll never turn back.”- CREEPY!

OH MY GOD *laugh*: - “That’ll do, pig,” Misty patted Gary on the head and dug in to her food. “That’ll do.”- I WUB THE MOVIE 'BABE', hahaha! SO DAMN FUNNY *gasp* need air *gasp* HAHAHA!

Ah! *shields eyes* THIS: - “God,” Misty’s face fell. “Are they—“ “Flirting?” Gary finished for her.- GOOD LORD! TOO creepy. . . that is wrong. . ugg.. .
Wow & Brock knows the Heimlich. . . he is a handy guy! No doubt!
This was quite an image: - They passed the living room, and the soap opera was still on TV. Brock and Delia were hugging as they cried over it, and Ash had taken to playing poker with Pikachu and Mimey.- LOL!

Hehe. . . good line: - “trying to tenderize me and then strip me down? If you wanted that kind of slavery you just had to ask.”- *devilish grin*

Nice ending, you tied it together beautifully: - “I lost a bike today, but I gained someone who can drive me anywhere in his car--which is better--and a slave for life.” –
& what nice smooch at the end too! ~_^

Any more egoshippies planned?

Maia
Midnight-mist-87
2005-07-26
ch 1,
abuseSo cute, I almost cried XD. I love how you write Gary, and I love how you write Misty. Loved this story.
Indigo Spirit
2005-05-26
ch 1,
abuseWow really nice I like it.
Hush Puppie
2004-06-21
ch 1,
abuse^_^ Well, if this isn't one of the cutest things I've read in a LONG time!
freeze1
2003-04-22
ch 1,
abuseOh, this was so cute! Really, it was. I love egoshipping, because of the wonderful battles of wits the two seem to have, and you put this into play perfectly. You're a really, really talented writer! Great, great, great job!
Silent Melancholia
2002-12-02
ch 1,
abuse“I’ve just kissed the devil, haven’t I?” Gary smirked.

-- Loved the style of humour throughout the fic but I'd have to say the line above was my favourite. Nice job ^_^
Hotaru3
2002-11-10
ch 1,
abuseLOL this was a cute story. It was funny ^_^ I liked the 'smart' comments from both Gary and Misty ^.^ (and this is coming from a die-hard AAML fan! u better feel special ^_^)
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